Requiem of Souls

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Did you ever wonder that there might be another world? a world where magic exists? A world where dragons, devils, gods and more.

Well, our Mc thought that those worlds were but the fantasy of crazed writers, and would only read about them in books and stories.However, he was transported to such a world, he and his classmates. A world where the laws made by men were easily bent, where life itself was not worth the pebbles on the roads.Betrayed by his classmates and offered as an unholy sacrifice, Daiki finds himself in hell, bound to eternal torment and destitution, forced to undergo hideous torments for sins he has yet to commit, Daiki swears to bring down the ones responsible over his demise.

The story 'truly' starts with the journey to hell and its seven circles, it is but the beginning of an event that will shake the heavens.

"I shall bring the divine to their knees and call upon the requiem...For it is my task...and my revenge."

(World mythology is included in this story, from Christian: like the fallen angels. The four horsemen the princes of hell, even Celtic, Indian, African, Greek, Hebrew, Egyptian and more. A lot of mythologies have been included within this story to add to its complexity and beauty, I hope you are a fan of old myths, this story is filled with them)

Before you start reading the reviews i advise you to read for yourself first, positive or negative reviews might give you a wrong pre based idea on the story, many great stories in this website have horrible reviews and many poor stories have positive ones, you are the judge of your choice don't let others make you refuse a story just because their opinion of it is different of yours.

Btw I am a non-native speaker and have self-taught myself English. So if you find mistakes please help me with proofing.

Edit : currently editing early chapters (7/17/2017)

(Book cover is not mine...)

Oh by the way i just joind theLITRPGgroup if any of you want to read more work you can head there and enjoy the content

My name Is Boucetta Amr, owner of this work, and i only allowed Royal Road, Amazon and Webnovel to publish this work on their pages. Any other copy of this work seen in any other website is stolen or being used without my permission, if you were asked to pay to read this anywhere other than amazon, you are being scammed.

Information

Status: Ongoing
Year: 2017
Author: Biako

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Rating: 3.2/ 5.0
Followers: 6
Views: 9,614

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Community Reviews(10)

thrillsofventureRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
When I reading this story, I thought about this song.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L94TLbMS1j4
The story is very slow going at first but as it progressives, the faster it goes in the tale. I have great hope for this story so, I'm giving you a little push.
DjabloRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
For anyone that read this review, read at least the first 10-15 chapters before forming your own opinion. In fact, the beginning may seem bland and not important, but later in the story, it helps to understand the personality of the MC.
One of the problems is the fact that the MC isn't motivated by anything but revenge.
Spoiler: Spoiler
It would have been nice if the story was more developed around him and the fallen archangel, Shara. I think the story would be more interesting if there was some sort of strong connection between them, even if it is only as sex friends. After all, she helped him to go through the harsh place that is the palace of bones.
I hope this story will go far.
RockinaliceRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
The grammar is not the greatest the story and character more than make up for it starts slow but once you gay past the first few chapters it grabs you the actions scene are well described and all the skills serve a purpose unlike some story
Tommyjl7Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Pretty good story keep up the good work loving the main character so far
FrinkRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
a fantasy story like any other but with a "hellish" twist that can spice things up. thats what made it is.
darkjectRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Slow story at first but picks up after mc suffers from the injustice of the gods.
DrMonotoneRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Man, this book spiraled out of control so fucking fast XD -- Loved it all the same though, not gonna lie! Always love a good tortured MC, so this one was right up my alley!
JonoRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
Really enjoy this story. although it does leave a fair bit to be desired in the grammar department.
CarnRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
Sure In the beggining and very rarely past the middle o the story there is some bad grammar but this is a great story with a lot of detail on the mc but the perspective change is a little bit confusing at times, although that's really the only thing I personally found bad about this,I can't wait for it to be finished :)
EvrinRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
WARNING
*POTENTIAL SPOILERS BELOW*
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Still here?
So, to be honest, this story isn't much in the way of being terribly original.
Uncaring Gods.
Destined For Greatness Syndrome.
Class-got-Summoned to another world Syndrome.
Church = Evil Cult.
Rich, Handsome A**hole Hero.
Poor, picked on MC goes from zilch to OP in no time flat.
These are a few of the main tropes I could think of off the top of my head that showcase themselves in this story.
It picks up some of the more popularized LN archetypes and kind of mashes them together.
Actually, it makes me think of an "Arifureta Shokugyo...meets Don't Fear the Reaper, meets Renegade Immortal(read it on Wuxiaworld) after the first arc where he turns into a spirit eater".
To be fair, it's almost impossible to be wholly original these days as everythings "been done". So, ignoring similarities, the story itself is fun and the characters are done as well as you might expect from an average LN type of tale.
I've actually enjoyed reading this as far as it's been written and would even rate it as above average in its category.
If there was anything of note keeping it back, it'd be the obvious lack of a proof-reader or editor.
Some of the words and phrases are just so wrong, it would be funny if it were intentional, while totally being in the purview of simply being repeated typo errors.
For example:
-The usage of "surly"(which means unfriendly) instead of "surely"(which means to be sure of), which wouldn't even be noticed if the author didn't use "surely" so much.
-"Lechers from below" as an ability name...now, see. I'm not sure just what the author was trying to portray here.
I mean, it's a bunch of hands coming out of the ground to grab the enemy...but really? Lechers? You're trying to say the enemy is being grabbed by a bunch of horny perverts?
This may be what it the author meant, but I kind of hope it isn't as it doesn't seem to be in context of what the MC is accomplishing or how he acquired it.
Then there's