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Community Reviews(10)

  • BansheePandaRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    It's on the tin, folks. This is a cute and fast-paced piece of fluff so far.
    Honestly, I have a very weird semi-loathing for VR stories. I've only read two others (not including this one, obviously), and they both did similar things elements-wise. I like it when the supernatural and the virtual combine, having reality and virtual reality affecting each other.
    This seems to be following a similar vein. Even if the VR doesn't affect reality, the potential is there.
    Character-wise, Faff is freakin' adorable. And while our human PoV character is obnoxious enough to want to strangle him, I find him oddly likeable.
    Please pardon my horrible review; I really suck at writing these things.
    All in all, I just wanted to say this is cute, fast-paced, and definitely worth your time. Check it out!
  • Ominous_EntityRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I really enjoyed reading the prologue! It's interesting and I like how the story slowly starts after we got to know the characters & setting a little. It already hinted on some plot and it was interesting until the end which makes me really look forward to the actual chapter & story!
    TL;DR: Interesting prologue , make sure to give it a try if you haven't already!
  • PureAyRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    If you want a funny litrpg this is it. Reminds me of early bai xiachun from will eternal. Just a  menace ti society, a catalyst of chaos.
    But for some reason half rhe reviews are people who read negative 3 chapters.
    Give this story a try it gets beer and beter especially around chaper 20 ish area
  • FreezReezyRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I love it. It's a very nice story with exciting narrative elements. Feel free to give this story a chance, you won't regret it. You can also learn something about military stuff while you are reading this story, as example I learned what the word "IFAK" means and also something about some weapons. It is also written in simple English so that anyone can understand it without looking up every second word. I look forward to more.
  • HyeonRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    i really enjoyed the story so far, at first it seems like a normal reincarnation, but i never read about a gladiator in this way :) its interesting and well written, im looking forward to future releases!!
  • JacksaunRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    (As of Chapter 6) - Not much of a spoiler, but more what to expect
    Spoiler: Spoiler
    Has many unique themes, animal companion, transmigration, LitRPG, etc
    Spelling is good, only a few minor typos, and the World building is great so far.
    Lots of potential, and you wont regret reading it. (chapters are long and satisfying)
  • idealicidealsRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Found this in the newly updated!
    Absolutely amazing! I'm currently 3 chapters in and totally wrapped in the story and really wondering where it goes!
    The author really hits good tones on showing what's going on in the MC's head and it's going to be very interesting how this pact with the demon goes and how it impacts the MC's outlook on the world.
    :)
  • athif23Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    It's Good Story, but the conversation is a bit awkward.
  • roddan93Royal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    After reading the first 5 chapters I must say that this is a great start for a novel and I hope that the continuation will keep the standard up.
    The biggest drawback in my ratings so far is the character score and it is only because it still is early in the story so we havn't seen much of them yet. I don't see why one character is in the story but I expect it to be revealed later.
    Overall I rate this story 4 out of 5 and hope that the author will continue upholding the standard he/she have set.
  • M.ScoutRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    I have to say this is one of my favourite stories.
    Now listen: I know the first three chapters might be a bit off putting, I had a bit trouble going through because I don't like long multi character dialogue scenes.   but that shouldn't stop you from reading,
    cough calling out people who rate a story after reading three chapters and or do not update their review cough
    because it just keeps getting better there are many funny scene but the story keeps going on. (of course it's funny what do you expect from a comedy tag?)
    I will continue reading this story and update this rewiev ones I have read more chapters.I should note that things like Grammar and "proper" character building don't really make or break a story. I noticed like 2 errors.