Remnants of Hisui (Pokémon Fiction) [OLD VERSION]
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
After a space-time distortion takes her to the future, Kora, a Hisuian Zoroark, finds herself pretending to be a human in order to learn more about the world. Somehow, that involves training Pokémon.
Oh, and she’s also accompanied by Volo, a man who wants to create the perfect world by tapping into thepower of friendship, whatever that means.
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Art is AI-generated by NightCafe.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2023
- Author
- Bonemaw
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.8/ 5.0
- Followers
- 195
- Views
- 31,052
Chapters(13 total)
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Community Reviews(2)
- Useless AweRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0This is a worthwhile read so if you're on the fence, just read it!
Style: Written mostly in the perspective of our main character Kora, we get to see unique descriptions and thoughts that we wouldn't get from a human perspective. Her insights with a pokemon twist adds a nice twist to this fan fiction.
Story: Kora and Volo get sucked into the future from Hisui, shenanigans ensue. The story revolves around our deuteragonists and the more they know about the world the better idea they have about what they want to do. Becoming a pokemon trainer is the way to do that. Either way its not a pokemon fiction if they don't want to be very best right?
Grammar: There are a few spelling mistakes which sneak into the writing but the author fixes them quick when a reader points them out. They aren't too glaring and rarely break your immersion which is the most important part.
Character: IMO the best part about this fiction is the characters and how they are written. Kora is already an interesting character although a little lacking in agency right now, the rest of the cast have their own motivations and goals and finding out more about them is why this fiction is entertaining.
We have only gotten a tiny glimpse into this story but it already seems so promising. I wouldn't be surprised if this reaches the level of Borne of Caution. - harkabbyRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0I've read quite a few Pokémon fanfics and this one really stood out.
The idea is well done and the author does a good job of balancing the viewpoint of someone who is not human but relatable.
I liked the writing style, not many grammar or spelling mistakes
Overall 5 stars, hoping for more!