Remains of an Era

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With the Great Galactic War still going strong, Jedi Master Coval and Darth Ominit clash aboard an ancient Rakatan ship in an attempt to gain control of its powerful technologies for their respective sides. Unfortunately however, when this technology is damaged during the battle, their two apprentices are catapulted into a future wildly different from their present. One part is consistent however. A galaxy spanning war.

It just so happens that this war has a lot of clones in it.

AUTHOR NOTE: No more weekly chapters, only chapters when I feel like it. Don't worry if you see the hiatus tag, this ain't dead, it'll just be VERY slow.

Basically me dragging two people I made up from the old republic era and throwing them into the clone wars era. I consider my knowledge of star wars lore to be comprehensive enough, however if you notice something point it out.

Please point out any grammatical or plot errors you find. If you decide that the general quality of the story is low please leave feedback as to why so I can improve it. This part is especially important because I went on a long hiatus and am likely incredibly rusty.

Suspected issues:

Lackluster scene descriptions.

Over describing certain aspects

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Also, I plan to put in memes at the end of every chapter that relates to the content of the chapter. In my past experience of doing that it has mixed results so let me know if your device explodes or something.

Live long and Taco. (Note, tacos only available to those whopay the subscription feerate the story.)

Chapters(47 total)

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Community Reviews(3)

  • noelbigdumRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I have throughly enjoyed this story so far. The characters are very good, seeming real with their own emotions as opposed to cardboard people a lot of stories have. I’m quite enjoying the relationship between the characters, it feels very real. The grammar is also extremely good, I’ve only seen one mistake in the whole thing. I binged the whole thing in one day, overall it’s a very good story and I’m looking forward to more.
  • Mystic TravellerRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    An interesting and unusual adventure/romance set in the Star Wars universe. Unique premise, lively action, brisk pace, and steady character development. I'm not even a huge modern Star Wars fan, but the story is engaging, and I hope the author completes it. In this world, the Sith are not altogether Evil, and the Jedi are not altogether Good.
  • Fenyx39Royal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    On one hand, I really like this. It’s Star Wars, and also an obvious romance path between our two main characters. At the same time, I just can’t buy into the ml’s narrative. The way he gets upset with the Jedi for not being the ‘good’ guys, when he is from the old republic and knows that. Also doesn’t seem sithy enough, more Kylo Ren emo style. That said, worth the read, just gonna skip a few parts