Reincarnations of a Hero

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2015

Author

beefstake2

• Chapter 4
  Nov 18, 2015
• Side Story: Loreine and the Roses Knights
  Nov 10, 2015
• Chapter 3
  Nov 9, 2015
• Chapter 2
  Nov 5, 2015
• Chapter 1
  Nov 2, 2015
• Beginnings and Beyond and Beginning!
  Oct 30, 2015

Reviews

Community Reviews(2)

• AnarchyDevRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  Unlike the user Aran, who has written the review without waiting for the story to progress and given an almost Bad rating but also says that he looks forward to the story, it's like degrading the story with the rating that doesn't justify the story... Cause according to me this story has a great potential with that almost unique Hero system and the content story based on almost multiple Universes and multiple Heroes etc.. Also another reason not to judge early is cause the 1st 3 chapters is like a prologue for the things to come... So the character build up will start later on and the MC family part may play a major part in the story and hence less intro to them...
  The grammar needs much much work....
  Will be waiting for the story to develope further!!!!
• AranRoyal Road

  ★★★ 2.5

  its not that bad so far, sure it only has 3 chapters so far but the story could be interesting :D
  i look forward to how this story turns out
  style:
  dont have enough information for this yet, sorry.
  story:
  so far the story is pretty standard with its background. its the standard gender bender hero but at least most other stories dont involve multiple lives set up in the prolog explaining that he had to train to be op and wasnt simply made that way.
  grammar:
  i made a lot of suggestions for chapter 2 and for the other 2 chapters were pretty bad but i simply ignored it or corrected it in my head as i was reading it. as its your first story i do look forward to seeing you improve as you add more chapters. it doesnt need to be instant improvement so dont worry to much so long as you slowly get better over time.
  characters:
  main character: the mc is pretty standard op reincarnation gender bender hero but most stories like this they didnt live a few thousand lives to get op and as mentioned he still had people stronger then him(her). as he doesnt have a set personality from living so many lives im really not sure how to judge the character yet.
  family: the amount of details wasnt bad but the time skips could have been used to talk about their training and build on their characters more as well as foreshadow some events they will be involved in.
  other: too early to judge on this point right now but i look forward to who you add and how the mc interacts with them.