Reincarnation to the Unknown

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Description

Raz Verdan died a painful death, a little after a small light called to him, and he appeared in the dark world of Neral. Darkness and destruction lurk around every corner, will Raz survive long enough to find a way back home or will the ever-growing darkness consume him.

[Apolgies everyone I've had some stuff come up. I probably won't be able to post another chapter till August 16th]

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2023
Author: KingRazerac

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.8/ 5.0
Followers: 5
Views: 1,690

Chapters(5 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

jaxobelRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
First of all, I'm liking Raz and the whole setup of the world, would've liked some other way to enter another world, this genre always needs stab or have the evilest character in all isekais kill the MC (a truck or bus).
Style: It's entertaining, easy to follow, and feels like I'm watching an anime, didn’t gave it 5 stars because authors tend to experiment a lot with the style right in the middle of the novel lol.
Grammar: Few minor errors but you do tend to repeat verbs, and adjectives a bit too much. Wouldn’t like to continue to read if verbs get repeated too much in a very short time. For example, the word leap was repeated 5 times in the same chapter. Correction suggestions to some words will be made inside the chapters.
Story: Decent honestly, it got me to read everything. We'll see how you keep developing this planet and Raz. I don't know why I keep thinking Raz is going to end up fusing with the dead wolf and tree lol
Character: I like that the focus is always on the MC to the level where you don't even give names to the normies.
Planning to come back and see more, kudos.