Reincarnation of Transmigrator

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Description

I was once a normal person but I unfortunately died only to be transmigrated into a xianxia world as a disciple in one of the best sects in the world, I forged my own dao created a unique cultivation method and even became the grand elder of the sect.... But I died. Only to have reincarnated as the young master of xin clan in another xianxia world(?). Well it's not like I had many regrets in my previous life..... but I really should have.........

gone to the *beeep* that time

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2023
Author: monarch_trustworthy_meow

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Rating: 3.7/ 5.0
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Community Reviews(5)

DaoistDreamwalkerRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
What can I say? It’s good
The story doesn’t take itself too seriously and contains a lot of good humour. It’s a parody on Xianxia stories similar to This young master is not canon fodder, though swerves into a more comedic direction yet does not fail to engage you with good characterisation that makes each person a distinct voice.
The first few chapters are a bit rough and some chapters could really be compressed into a single longer chapter, but I can say monarch meow improves tremendously as the story progresses into its latter dream arc. At that point, the comedic satire takes a backseat to begin a mystery plot that I find to be more engaging then raw comedy from earlier portions. This is largely according to my taste as I prefer more serious tones.
Overall a very fun comedic take in the Xianxia genre.
EstanforthRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
I've been putting off reading this novel for quite a while now. I would sometimes come and read the first few chapters but just as quickly drop it because I didn't like how it was written. However, I ran out of things to read, found this, and decided to read all of it.
Definitely worth it if you choose to read it all at once and not delay. The author didn't have the greatest writing at the beginning, though everything came together for me around chapter 28 and I stopped questioning whether I would drop.
There's a deep story behind the fluff that most readers won't be used to, especially if they came expecting a normal xianxia. If you have the attention span to read it all at once and won't drop it due to a few early chapters, I think it's actually a very good novel and I'm hoping the author updates in the future. The latest chapters were also very engaging, though I saw comments about people being confused about the content, I'll attribute it to having too long between chapters to remember what was actually happening.
Dislikes:
The too-liberal use of ANs got annoying, there was even one I read and thought it was a note for themselves and not the reader. I wouldn't be too against it if it was only every so often, at the end of the chapter, or had important notes for readers to understand, however, it was usually none of that.
The Ara-Aras and Fufu laughs got kinda cringy and annoying as well. I wouldn't mind it as much if the characters doing it fit the archetype and it wasn't overused, though I will say that I don't remember any of this in the later chapters that I enjoyed far more. So after brushing past it, they stopped appearing.
Minor note: sometimes there were grammar problems like an early period before the end of the sentence or the name of a person was mistyped, though none of it was major and I was able to easily brush past it due to not being unreadable and rare.
DCatRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
It was an excellent story at the start. However the latest delve through the inner tribulation is messy. The execution from memory to tribulation to present breaks immersion in the story - it feels like the author is trying something new which is okay as there's no better time to start than now, just lowers the quality of the story.
ElvenDenRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
I give up, author's passion for brackets was stronger than me. I probably should have done it earlier and not torment myself, but my hopes did not leave me, and the story, despite its overcrowding of cliches, seemed quite a funny satire. From the very beginning, I did not expect something masterpiece and moved the work to the category "so bad that it's even good", I mean stupid, but funny. Nevertheless, the worst thing that happened to the fiction turned out to be cringe inserts of writer's own comments wherever it possible or not.
Mr. MochiRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
This is a fairly generic slice of life power fantasy.
In my opinion, the story starts off a bit shaky then gets better and finds it’s rhythm. It then becomes pretty bad- to the point I’m not interested anymore.
It’s pretty noticeable that the quality steeply declines during the newest (at this time) events. The overarching motivation feels like an excuse for edgy behavior and uninteresting drama. Add on to the fact that the author forces you to revisit the same meaningless scenes from different POVs makes it feel even worse.
For example:
You have to read about a stroll and a dinner twice where the MC barely says 3 sentences, and the only reason it is a scene, is because the MC is present.
You have to read paragraphs on how other people react to his “edgy” behavior and blah blah.
To compound it all, it feels like the author randomly introduces new characters to suddenly become the villain of the arc, and it makes the whole experience messy and unsatisfying.
Speaking of characters being shoved into the story, what I assume is the main female MC is pretty two dimensional and flat. She has a tragic backstory that feels more stupid than pitiful, and I think she’s just a bother. The author goes out of the way to insert her constantly into the main narrative, and it makes the scenes a bit of a chore.
As for the other characters, the author makes them feel like set pieces, rather than people. My favorite is the grandfather, but that’s not saying much as the rest of the cast is fairly forgettable and un-impactful.
That is not to say that the side characters don’t have their own backstories and crafted motivations. But character development is handled rather obviously, with simple actions having dramatic consequences. It’s not really enjoyable when every mysterious character has their secrets known, or characters with potential are given resources freely.
Between the several paragraphs that tell you how amazing the MC is and how much he stands out, you quickly get the point t