Reincarnation Gone Wrong [OLD]

Self-Published

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Description

Yuki died. Her killer? Truck-kun.

Now she's been isekai'ed, but slightly wrong assumptions during character creation complicate things, just a bit.

Before you start, here is what you can expect of the story: Characters make mistakes. Bad things happens. People are crazy. Characters lose sometimes. A bit of fluff and a bit of comedy. Can be pretty dark at some points.

Discord server, if anyone wants to ask questions, hang out, or make suggestions:https://discord.gg/pne3CaCUrX

Tentative schedule: M-F, with weekends off.

Tags from SB:  Fantasy, Girls Love, LitRPG, Animal Characteristics, Crazy Protagonist, Dark, Dungeons, Evolution, Female Protagonist, Hiding True Abilities, Hiding True Identity, Magic, Reincarnated as a Monster, Reincarnated into Another World, Yandere

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Chapters(2 total)

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Community Reviews(7)

  • EricSRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Messed up system, cute fluffy bunnies, and action. What more can you want?
    The prose is fairly good, setting/characters promising if not yet fleshed out, and her build offers a good amount of potential progression even if it is a bit generic.
    Best of luck! Cant wait to see where little Biscuit will go
  • Marshall75Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I wouldn’t usually write a review after just a few chapters, but I’m really enjoying this story and hope it gains an audience. Well written at the sentence level to its overall prose. Really funny as something like a parody but also a story that builds some suspense and offers up a pretty great MC. She gets really stoned from some magic mushrooms and loads up on magic skills she needs hands and a voice box to activate, but she’s an Isekai expert and figures out some way to get through her first obstacles. Her rabbit siblings are awesome and it’s pretty funny how she describes them.
  • Samantha NelsonRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Little bunny Yuki wanted to be free.
    Truck-kun's lights were blazing bright as it came to be.
    A conflation during creation; she took a different path.
    Now rabbit's have a racket; a weasel faces wrath.
    This tale is quite a fun one; a cute one that'll you see.
    And for those a wondering, a strong litRPG.
    The grammar is near flawless. The mistakes are minimal.
    It won't make you nauseous. It's quite impeccable.
    The style's rather fitting. No problems to behold.
    Sadly, Yuki's not a bard; a different tale unfolds.
    Conflicts and some morals all raise up their head.
    And for those still wondering, some will wind up dead.
    The characters are enjoyable, each with a calming view.
    Except for all the villains, I'm sure you'll hate them too.
    So far there are two protags; each having their own tale.
    They each are on a journey. We'll see what it entails.
    The story is a fun one. Yuki's left the warren long.
    Now the story journeys and another town is gone.
    The intrigue now is building. The world growing wide.
    The two are facing challenges. Who knows if they can hide?
    So I lurk in shadows as I follow them along.
    For I wish to see the sights and wish to know their song.
    So come and join the others. The warren still has room.
    Come and watch the story and listen to the tune.
  • Spleen23Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I like this story, the MC had a edge, and starts at a disadvantage, she screws up but explores her opinions, and she has a screw up firend shes now stuck with.
    Reads well, has a good build up number of chapters already written for binging, so the author has already shown they can go the distance.
    I'm looking forward to seeing where the story goes since I got no clue what it building towards, or if it is just going to lurch along with character development over a overarching plot which sounds just fine to me.
  • Z.A. KarpelRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    abandon all free time all ye who enter here, for you will binge this story the moment you start.
    you will not be disappointed, what are you waiting for? EVEN MORE fluffy bunnies to invite you to read? Have you no shame? there are plenty of fluffy bunnies and I'm sure they will make time to steal your soul in exchange for +1 daily mana regen.
  • ZagarothRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    The story is silly in many ways, it is meant to be silly, now let go, let the silliness flow through you. Good, good.
    *ahem*
    Style:
    The style is light and fluffy, which is appropriate for most of the story. Upon occasion, it feels like it could be a little tighter and more cohesive, but it's minor and I don't know how to point to where to change anything specific.
    Grammar:
    On point, few mistakes, and those are quickly corrected.
    Story:
    This is an interesting and fun spin on Isekai-gone-wrong. It has a balance of plot drive and character drive elements: You can see some future conflicts being set up early on, but a lot of the action is currently focused on what the characters are choosing to do.
    Character:
    It really shines here. Yuki and [redacted] are fun characters, and every rabbit needs a pet human, right? There is a lot to like about them, but neither one is perfect. They are just trying to live and maybe become better people in the process. And even the characters you don't get to know much about yet have a bit of their personality and history shine through, there are several that I am very, very curious about.
  • azureyRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    The first paragraph gives you a glimpse of the novel, so far. This is not serious reading folks.
    With that said, treasured ones can and do die. The mc is not op, and the stakes are real.
    Fun light dark novel, I hope it continues.
    I'm a reader, not a writer. Why must reviews by a certain length? Boop la bloop la