Reincarnating into Naruto’s world because of bad luck

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Description

All his life, Dylan had to fight against bad luck. No matter what he tried, everything always turned against him. While others had misfortune knocking on their doors from time to time, for Dylan, it was as if the detestable thing moved to his house permanently to then hire him as a servant with a black company's slave's salary and treatment. But, in a twist of fate, his bad luck, which was about to become his doom, turned out to be the best lucky charm in the world.

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DISCLAIMER: I don't own Naruto or any of its characters. This is Fanfiction. Written purely to have fun while doing so, and the only things that belong to me here are the OCs. All rights go to their respective owners.

I'll also be posting this in Scribble Hub and Webnovel under the same name.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2022
Author: Dvelasquez

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Rating: 3.8/ 5.0
Followers: 46
Views: 15,474

Chapters(16 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

Real_ErebosRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I like it. While I think that the whole 'traveler' and 'random gust in the void' thing can potentially destroy this peace of art, the MCs backstory is reallly nice written and even while the four year skip was brave to say at least, pacing and character interaction are smooth and all in all it as a nice flow.
I am really happy that now came new chapter and I hope to achieve with this to motivate the autor to writte more ;)
Pls have all a nice day and a nice time reading this
KvazRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
So after binge reading the chapters we got so far I have to say I see a lot of potential in this Story and I love what's here so far.
For all who can't be bothered to read the rest, just check it out. It's worth it. If it continues that way it has potential to get into my top 3 Naruto fanfics of this Site, and I read or started reading almost all of them.
Style 4/5:
Nothing special so far, but certainly above average. In chapter 2 I think the Author could have written a bit better but overall good.
Grammar 4.5/5:
I haven't spotted any mistakes and all together is on a good level. I might have missed some, especially since English is my third language but I think I can still say that it's on good level with certainty. It feels like the chapters get proofread so certainly a good sign.
Story 4/5:
I think the start is great and also a fresh idea. There aren't enough chapters to really properly judge anything yet, but the Idea and how it's written so far got me hyped up.
Character 4/5:
The characters feel very human so far. That's all I can say without spoiling too much, but for those interested:
I was worried at the start of the story that we are gonna get another reincarnator that is better than half the Naruto world by 7. But my worries were quickly laid to rest. MC has a good head start but nothing too unbelievable. Also the Author uses timeskips rather well to skip to age / power stages where it gets more interesting.
Another thing I really like is the interactions between the characters so far. They were very close to something I expect of proven author. And is certainly very good with a lot of potential set up.
Conclusion:
While there is not a lot too judge yet, what is here so far has me hoping for an amazing Naruto fanfic and a good story over all. A few more chapters and I can judge a lot better if what I think is coming is actually happening. But so far it definitly looks like the start of something good.