Reincarnated as a Deadbeat Dad

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Description

I was hit by a truck and died.

Then I met a goddess. I thought she would send me to a fantasy world to learn magic. Instead, she transmigrated me to a parallel universe very similar to Earth.

Now I have a wife and two children, I have to work hard to give them a good life. Oh, did I ever tell you that I was sent to a 3rd world country in 1999?

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2023
Author: Pujimaki

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Michelle88Royal Road
★★★ 2.5
To be honest, I read only six chapters and did not go deep into the novel to give a fairly objective review, but it was enough for me to decide for myself whether I want to continue reading. there are several reasons for this.
1. the main character too quickly came to terms with his death and stopped being sad about his family. a normal person would rest for a week.
2. feelings imposed by the previous owner of the body. absolutely can't stand this. in many novels, this is ignored, but the process of inheriting memories is extremely dangerous and can cause dissociation of personality. now imagine that feelings are added to this. in this case, the person will be completely lost and will begin to go crazy being constantly in fear and doubt.
3. The main character very easily and naturally accepted his new feelings for his wife and children, who did not exist before. it seems absurd to me. it would be better if there was an awkwardness that the main character and his family gradually overcame. this is more logical and allows the characters to seem more alive.
4. is there a need for inheritance of memories ? the main character has moved into an almost completely identical world.
5. sugary phrases. some people may like it, but I don't, and for me it's a minus. especially when it is, in fact, a stranger to whom you have inherited feelings and memories.