reincarnated as a centipede in the dungeon (raacitd)

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Description

a girl by the name of Sayuki Iizuka was in a train accident because a person accidently bumped into her but as she wakes up she slowly realizes that she got reincarnated into a harsh world filled with magic and monsters

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Status
Hiatus
Year
2023
Author
cj the writer

Tags

ACTIONFEMALE LEADDUNGEON CRAWLER

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Rating
3.0/ 5.0
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2
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1,019

Chapters(2 total)

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  • BlockSockRoyal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    Not a ton of content yet, but idea is sound enough. Lots of stories hate on centipedes so could be fun to flip the coin.
    But needs 2 things right off the bat
    A - figure out how to put in spaces between paragraphs. It's important for breaking up ideas and controlling the pace at which your readers progress.
    B - Toooo many "I's"
    Diversifying your sentence structure will only help you. Right now the best way is to limit how many 'I ' sentences you use.
    For more help I'd look for your favorite 1st person story, just copy a paragraph and see how they make sentences.
    Hope this helps! Good job starting!