reign of unstoppable
Self-Published
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Description
"A man who exists beyond reality walks the world of Kyron as a simple traveler. But those who challenge him soon realize—he is not bound by fate, magic, or even existence itself. With a mere whisper, history bends to his will. Who is he? And why does he walk among mortals?"
Information
- Status
- Completed
- Year
- 2025
- Author
- D H
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 1.5/ 5.0
- Followers
- 1
- Views
- 152
Chapters(1 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- RznRoyal Road★★ 1.5This is a story that has a lot of very serious problems from the choppy prose, to the awkward scenes to the way in which they all play out. The unconnected scenes themselves with titles are a bit of a problem because each one serves to tell some aspect of our OP MCs unlimited god-like powers. The grammar and prose are other issues and the writing itself stiff. This would need a good copyedit to have a consistent tone, but then the narrative arc could use some work first.