Rei:Incarnation

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Eric was a normal high schooler (whatever that means) when he died at school. After meeting and hurting Death's feelings, he gets a second chance at life. The only catch is that he doesn't know what he'll end up as. He will have many challenges as tries to adjust to his new life. Which would be easy if knew what was going on. With no hero, savior of the world, or dragon slaying quest for him. You think life would be easy, right?

Note: Revised version is up. Link to it is on "The End (Update)" May god bless your soul if you read all of the chapter here. You're gonna need it.

Information

Status: Cancelled
Year: 2021
Author: KaibaHo

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Rating: 2.6/ 5.0
Followers: 21
Views: 10,824

Chapters(19 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

BullerRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
I suppose it might have been from a few months ago. That's the only excuse I could truly find in my little head, since there is no way that I actually read the story back then. This... is some weird stuff. Not the good weird stuff either(do note that I am using the word stuff instead of shit). This is something that seems inchorent at the best of times, with the worst being... cold sweats during psychedelic nightmares where you can't distinguish the war from the fireworks kinda of stuff.
3/5 from me. Just read the revised version, please
XultanisRoyal Road
★ 1.0
Well, the first chapter, prologue 1, was somewhat coherent. Grammatical errors and such aside. But as the story progresses, it just.... gets weird. Incoherent plotline, possible gender gender but hard to say because we aren't sure if the perspective has suddenly shifted.
As of chapter 6 the MC, presumably a Male in the prologue, is now a female humanoid. A character refers to 'her' as some sort of strong monstrous entity, but no further details are provided beyond high strength and eating people.
It feels like a potentially good story is there, buried under bad dreams during an acid trip. If the story was more evenly paced, less sudden jumps, and a little more detail (plot detail, not necessarily characters which are better depicted than anything else), it would improve it quite a bit.
Also, the MC comes across as a complete psychopath in prologue pt 2, and the... special character in that comes across as random, making no sense to the story in any way, shape, or form. Especially as they have time to do what they do in the middle of a school in broad daylight.