Record Of The Immortal Teacher

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Description

What happens when your master abandons you, you who has no family left behind....

What path is left for you, you who has been chased by every firmament...

What choice will you follow, you who has already gained immortality...

Find out the everyday life of a young immortal who starts cultivating and teaching in a small sect.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2017
Author: Pandashta

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Rating: 4.2/ 5.0
Followers: 264
Views: 139,478

Chapters(37 total)

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Community Reviews(5)

AvidReader9508Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
So I just caught up to chapter 28, gotta say I'm loving it and cant wait for more to come out. Also for those people who were degrading your book don't let it get to you please, I believe I speak for the people who enjoy your book but don't tend to leave a review that I would be sad to not have the book continue. Don't let the minority of haters stop you from continuing such a wonderful story.
MiridurialRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
First i would like to inform you that i started reading this story from ch0, i newer read any comments on any of the chapters or a review of the story, not until i found a notice left by the author.
After reading that note i was confused then i was dismayed, i had no idea that one of my favored stories was so misunderstood, not once had i had any problems following the story, i found it was well balanced and progresset smoothly from chapter to chapter.
My biggest regret concernin this story is that i was a silent reader, not once did i thank the author for sharing their world with me nor did i notice that other did not seem to understand the story.
I can only hope that my sincere thank you to the author for sharing this story with me, will help them keep writing this story for as long as it takes for others to realise the true nature of this story.
PS.
Thank you Pandashta, thank you.
MastersgtjamesRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
I would give the story 5 stars.
BUT
AUTHOR! Why the constant contradictions. Why the needless struggle for the sake of a struggle? MC is immortal, MC has CRAP TON of knowledge. But somehow feels restricted because she cannot cultivate?! WHAT? Who cares, she is smart enough. Even a little bit of her knowledge would get her a position as a teacher.
Why does she need to join a sect!? couldn't this story be just as easily told with her being a wandering teacher? or one who travels with her students?
What is this MULAN!? Why does she need to pretend to be a man!? to lay low? Again, WHY? She has no formation/technique/skill to let her hide her appearance? or at least distract others from her? She may look 18, but she is immortal. Is she not older than 18? why is her knowledge/experience of the world so limited, regardless of how many books she has read?
I like the story, I do. BUT COME ON! This is just aggrevating.
PeppermancerRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
For a book called "Record Of The Immortal Teacher" There is very little teaching. You set it up in the beginning decently well that she would be a teacher. That's why I started reading, because I wanted to read about an immortal teacher. But she is actually a disciple in a sect hiding her gender with no cultivation and apparently very little knowledge, on top of only being 18 years old. I feel more betrayed than anything, like you went back on a promise. She has a single disciple but even then it seems like he's helping her more than her helping him.
As for the story, there isn't one. We understand that people don't like the darkness attribute. We get that her brothers are the heads of heaven and hell. But what does any of that mean, how does that interact with the story, what is the story even? Where is the conflict, what is motivating the characters, what journey are they going to go through. Like sure, she wants to be a teacher, but she is doing nothing to move towards that goal really. And in what way does any other information you've given us affect this? Why is her darkness attribute important other than that other people don't like it? It just feels like you have an idea sort of for a story, but can't actually execute it.
Your writing is also a problem as well. While there are no glaring grammar issues, your writing is very general. By that I mean, there is little to no detail on anything. What does anything you've written about look like? How do the characters feel in different scenarios and why? What are the different realms of cultivation, and what do they signify? You don't necessarily need to do an info dump, but more information needs to be had. Not only does it leave all the heavy lifting to the readers mind, but it makes the characters seem very similar. All anger sounds the same, all disciples sound the same, all elders sound the same. What are the defining characteristics of anyone in the story? You may have noticed that I haven't used any of your c
TernidoRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
This is a nice take on DAO. There is not a lot of trivial information. It doesen't go into ditale. I hope you continu to bild the Relationshipe of the MC and her first deciple.