Reborn to become the boss of the Strongest Mafia

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Description

The Richest man, The Boss of a Organization, The one who'll make a Labyrinth, The smartest man, The one hailed as a genius, The most mysterious man, The one who was reborn. Jason Zheng, a Chinese American man, a person who was full of debt in his last life gets reborn after being shot to death by his debt collectors. But being reborn isn't the only thing that happens. Along with his new life he is given a mission of conquering the world. For this mission he is given 3 powers to help him on his mission. It’s my first story, constructive criticism would be appreciated.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2016
Author
Gods Apostle

Tags

ACTIONFANTASYADVENTUREMARTIAL ARTSROMANCE SUBPLOTPSYCHOLOGICAL

Royal Road Stats

Rating
3.7/ 5.0
Followers
369
Views
232,853

Chapters(33 total)

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Community Reviews(8)

  • zzaazzooRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Has a lot potential, Can’t give a review yet I will wait until you bring more chapters.
  • fraulcruzRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Thanks for the story! I find this really funny! I'm eager to know how he'll eventually conquer the world. There's a lot that you can do with the story, and the modern setting of it really fascinates me. I hope you'll continue with this up to the end. Keep up the great work!
  • MarshalBlack26Royal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    Among all of the novels I have read so far , this one's the only story that used ants to dominate the world... And Although the progress speed of this story is rather hasten, it is still acceptable for the most part since it is somehow well-explained.... Though I recommend that the characters should have deeper personalities... Anyway, this story is AWESOME!, and the direction it's heading is definitely a good one .... JOB WELL DONE AUTHOR!!,  and please UPDATE MORE FREQUENTLY 'cause I am sure that this story will be a popular one when  the chapters reach around 20+ or so (Atleast that's what I wanted) ... So please more more more!! ... don't stop until it reaches the 1OO+ CHAPTERS BOTTLENECK (Again, atleast that's what I wanted *sigh*) ..
    ..KEEP IT UP SIRE!!!~~~~~
  • YiteWriteRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    that's all i'm saying...sorry but i don't review much this is my 2nd or 3rd review
  • LollypopzRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    This is a really unique storyline which I haven't seen before, it is rather sad that the writting itslef is not really up to par, however, the author definitely has a really creative mind.
  • RipentRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    While this story is quite intressting it also lacks a bit too much to make it really good like some of the stories out there.
    However the concept of the stroy is very intressting, and makes a really good light read. (If you don't take it too far and have to point out eveyr mistakes while you want to read well planned stories, cause then you will be dissapointed.)
    The biggest problems I see is the grammar, with few mistakes in the words but the sentences are horrible.
    The writer also don't give the depth to the story that most of them have and the story progresses just way too fast.
    If you could fix those things you wil have a more "proper" story.
    But with regarding all that i still enjoyed it and would recomend it to those that just want something intresstng to read without high standards of things like: grammar, story progression, character developmnent and so on.
    PS: I would really like it if you rewrote previous chapter and gave the whole story a bit more depth to it so we can get a bigger picture of why,how,when and those things.
  • saleban1Royal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    Has a lot potential, Can’t give a review yet I will wait until you bring more chapters.
  • FablecrusherRoyal Road
    ★★ 2.0
    So this is my review up until chapter 8. I decided to give this one a read, since it has had amazing rating thusfar and was there apalled when faced with what I could only describe as an unbearable read. I will try to stay as positive as possible, but let me just say: I am unable to continue reading this story due to some (personal) preferences, but I felt that people that feel the same, should be warned.
    First of all, the style. This story takes information dumping to a whole new level. In just a few sentences, the author is able to completely summarise the life of the main character. This is neither positive nor negative, as for this story it's what's intended, but others might not enjoy such little dedication. The author chose this format, so it would only be fair to respect it and ignore this small fact.
    The style also gives of the feeling that it is written from the top of the author's head, without any restraint or thought whatsoever. This creates both a feeling of genuineness, but also one of chaos. The story jumps from one thought to the next and I would advise the writer to slow down in his enthusiasm to share his story with us.
    Having mentioned this speed issue, I'd also like to touch upon the pacing. This, of course, is an opinion, but I do reckon that more people will feel this way. In less than 300 words, the author set up the whole scenario of the MC and in little more than 600, he has set about the whole story. It feels way too fast and abrupt. The feeling this gives of, is that the author was not interested in these parts of his story and wanted to skip these very fundamental parts. I therefore suggest that he, again, slows down in his excitement, which we all know and understand, to write.
    Having said that, I come upon the story and its concept. It's not completely new and creative, but surely creative enough to give this one a go if you're interested in these stories. Not much to say, other than that there is nothing wrong here and it will attract