Reborn Magician Tyrant [Old]

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Author's Note #4: This is the old, hastily written version.

A great magician from the Human Kingdom travels west to fight the Demon Kingdom. Finally, after eight long years of war, the Human Kingdom emerges triumphant!

But, just as the Human Kingdom begins to celebrate the victory, an enemy from a land far to the east attacks!

After rushing to help support the Human Kingdom capital against the assault, the magician is met with the sight of his beloved city razed to the ground. The magician fights off whatever invaders he can, using whatever tactics he knows, but he is eventually felled in combat due to the superior abilities of the invaders.

However, death is not the end! The magician reincarnates, awakening as a citizen of the empire which conquered his home!

Author's Note #3: Okay, that's the end for me. This is too boring for me to continue writing, and I've gotten back to writing Reborn as a Dungeon Core in an Apocalyptic World. At 26,772 words, this has gotten too boring for me to continue. I'm probably going to take this basic story and rewrite it into something way better w/ longer chapters, but at least I had fun for the six days it took to write this much.

PS - Love the reviews; they're great. Way to go, dude with 22 thumbs up and 0 thumbs down!

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2017
Author
Myself

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Rating
2.7/ 5.0
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89,789

Chapters(40 total)

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Community Reviews(4)

  • RoktahRoyal Road
    ★★ 2.0
    Style: Chapters are horribly short. except for the prologue the chapter contain about 200 words. I´m sorry but really. one chapter ended with him going to pickup a cultivation level measuring tool. the next chapter ended with him picking up said tool and the following chapter was about him using the tool.
    Story: fifteen chapters in, and world bulding hasnt really happened(maybe because these chapter if properly linked would simply be 3 acceptable length chapters).the concept of the story is actually not bad. but gets butchered for me later on with one "wrong" choice
    Spoiler: Spoiler
    we know the basics: mc is a warhero from a magician country, country gets attacked and taken over by a cultivator country without difficulties. mc gets reborn into the cultivation country and admits that cultivation is better than magic but avoids cultivation like a pest and prefers to hold onto his magic.At his awakening ceremony for his cultivation he had to jump into a pot with boiling liquid, the moment he did he used ice magic to cool the liquid down and after the ceremony he obviously had no cultivation.
    he is hated by his brothers and father because his mom died at his birth and thats pretty much all the information we got until chapter 15. i expected him to combine magic with cultivation and not to completely dismiss it
    character: unreasonable family that hates him because his mother died at his birth.
    unlikable mc: that does nothing to increase his stregth. he was powerful for a magician in his country and was still sloughtered by the cultivators. in this life he decides to use the magic that was miserably defeated before and deny the cultivation system just because of his pride as a magician.
    there is not one character i like in this novel. well i dont dislike his maid.
  • quebooksRoyal Road
    ★★ 2.0
    It started really great , i mean a wizard in a cultivation world : Great idear . However it soon starts to get bad . Like the wizard doesn't act like a wizard . Instead it seems like a racism-wizard with an arrogant problem seems to be there .
    I mean it's okay if the wizard has some kind of anger towards cultivation and doesn't want to cultivate , since it's because he believes that magic is able to become way stronger since he's training it from young .
    However it gets worse later on , the mc sees some kind of cultivation stealing artifact and even sneaks towards it in the middle of the night . Not only that , just touching and not stealing . Common ?!
    It makes no sense , we have a wise wizard with a huge curiosity . Now that there's something like a magicial artifact that is the BANE of cultivators . The wizard doesn't like cultivators -> doesn't steal it , only touch it and then leaves it .
    Not only that , the wizard is way TOO LAZY . He wants to become some overlord thingy in the world , but what does he do ? Gathering informations on stones and mines . Not only that , the wizard even tells us that he is way stronger than in his previous life . However he is not able to get some idear on how to get stronger , instead he just lazes around while waiting for his servant to bring food .
    Then he wonders where the servant is after a WHOLE DAY . After that ? Just running around , bribing some kind of weirdo in a whore house for information .
    I mean yeah , the story is kinda okay if you break it into little pieces . However to say the truth . I got more character informations of the servant than the mc . The mc is just too dumb , lazy and even snobbish to even count as a "great" wizard . Not only that , he is a little child . Not youth , not young teenager , BUT A CHILD !
    It would be better to change the character description of the wizard from the strongest wizard in a certain kingdom who died because of the cultivators to a young , snobbish , lazy an arrogant magician
  • tylicRoyal Road
    1.0
    I must say, it's a little disappointing to see a work that has so much potential be dragged through the gutter.
    The story is interesting but where's the detail, where's the flavour? what is the reasoning behind the characters? what's the motivation? the synopsis is beautiful it's draws in the reader but then you read it and it's like a scatter plot.
    This could be a great book just is lacking in effort, if this book is the authors baby then call child services because this book is neglected and malnourished.
  • FoxTrotRoyal Road
    0.5
    The starting of the story seems promising with wayyy better grammar than what u get to see on RRL and then thats IT. Then u jump down mount everest as a nose dive.
    The chapters are very short. U start reading it... get into the chapter and poof - its finished....
    Note for author - make chapters wayyyy longer than what u have right now...