Reborn into the RWBY World with a Small Cheat
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Description
This is my first story so please don't be mean (I don't mind critisism but some people are mean just to be mean). Also I want to make this interactive with readers (so I know people are reading) so please give me some feedback.
The mc, a guy named Finn Pherb, just died geting run over by a truck (like nearly every other reincarnator). He thought his life was over, but it was just beginning. He gets reborn into the world of RWBY that's the same but different (in other words I'm ignoring the show so I can write a story that isn't to depressing) and with a little cheat.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2017
- Author
- EffectedNote312
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 2.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 37
- Views
- 63,386
Chapters(25 total)
- this is embarrassingDec 6, 2017
- New story mcDec 3, 2017
- I have another idea and follow up for the last oneDec 3, 2017
- I have an ideaDec 1, 2017
- This is awkwardNov 30, 2017
- Sorry about thisNov 30, 2017
- Chapter 5Nov 24, 2017
- Please Don’t Kill MeNov 22, 2017
- The ReveiwNov 15, 2017
- Info on DustNov 14, 2017
- Chapter 4.5Nov 13, 2017
- Chapter 4Nov 13, 2017
- This Has A Point!Nov 13, 2017
- Chapter 3Nov 1, 2017
- A Spoiler Chapter. You’ve Been Warned.Oct 27, 2017
- Finn’s Mother and FatherOct 26, 2017
- Second Weapon PollOct 26, 2017
- Chapter 2Oct 25, 2017
- Faunus PollOct 25, 2017
- Chapter 1.5Oct 24, 2017
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Community Reviews(4)
- MU1G0ku1Royal Road★★★ 2.5I tried to come here for some help with mine and all I found were some very short stories, polls and random stuff. I do get that he is struggling but still, I just had trouble getting into it as well.
Hes doing a good job though with connecting with his fans, I do like that - CrytachRoyal Road★★ 2.0Dude you really need to get your shit together... I understand that you want to inform us of things, but for the love of god put the author NOTES(note not story) In the grey boxes at the bottom of a chapter, seriously!, this is advice but most people want to read chapters of a story when they click next chapter, not polls and schedules and things like that, before you do polls or anything of the sort FIRST establish a fan base.
with regards to your chapters they are good, but the interruptions make reading your work tedious. - AusNecromancerRoyal Road★ 0.5This is not a [profanity deleted] blog website. I don't need to know about your daily life if you need to post that crap go to FaceBook or something.
On the other hand the few chapters you have posted are good and I must say the idea is cool and can't wait for more. But still you have more "updates" them actual story and it is a turnoff. - Federated SunsRoyal Road★ 0.5The author has no idea what they are doing. They literally post more about their own life and "updates" than the actual story. The first actual chapter doesn't happen until the 5th entry into this and even then it's just some quick five minutes on a keyboard entry for a chapter. It's all nonsense with no real thought of effort put into it.
They make a poll for every little detail on the story instead of coming up with something on their own and just going for it and when they do write it's so short and has nothing of substance to it.