Reborn into BNHA

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2019

Author

exofurios

• U.A. exam
  Jan 25, 2020
• Meeting her
  Jan 20, 2020
• dungeoning
  Jan 2, 2020
• entering the dungeon
  Oct 30, 2019
• After some years
  Oct 24, 2019
• training and tragedy
  Oct 18, 2019
• Getting a new bloodline
  Oct 14, 2019
• Starting my training
  Oct 12, 2019
• my life right now
  Oct 8, 2019
• REBORN
  Oct 8, 2019

Reviews

Community Reviews(2)

• Shiro OkamiRoyal Road

  ★★ 2.0

  Review in progress/ Potential editing of chapters to fix grammar and spelling mistakes( i suggest reading the first couple of chapters)
  Meh, it's only the first chapter and has room for improvement. The story doesn't go into detail about his emotions or his reasons for his actions. The novel so far gives me the feeling that it's a beta mc. Slightly bias as the main character seems like a typical naive hero and I prefer the opposite so it may have affected my judgment in the scores I have given.
  Grammar seems to be decent and readable but you can easily notice a few mistakes here and then. Character is pretty bland and not fleshed out, but it's only the first chapter so the author has plenty of time to work on that. A lack of detail from the type of style the author has gone with is quite noticeable, I suggest inputting more descriptions about his thoughts and feelings, reasons behind his actions, his environment and later on input different points of perspective to show how others think of the Mc.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                      Not much else to comment on except that the chapter was short but can be attributed to being the first chapter. If a reader is pondering whenever to read this novel, I suggest to read the first few chapters ( hopefully the other chapters are released in due time which will give more room for people to evaluate and know whenever to continue the novel or drop it ) and see if you enjoy the setting as its better to make your own judgment than using my bias review ( and high standards) as a basis for your decision.
  Gonna keep it bookmarked and see how the story progresses, don't give up author and strive to improve your writing when creating this novel. Take
• _-Paris-_Royal Road

  ★ 1.0

  The Grammar in this Story is really Bad . The Charakters aren't really developed and it isn't clear wich goal the Story follows . The thought's and feelings aren't described well . Another thing is that he can summon a Dungeon , it doesn't fit with the Story . The Story has a lot to improve in .