Reborn as a dungeon core in an apocalyptic world

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2017

Author

Myself

• Chapter 1 - Dungeon Core Candidate
  May 16, 2017

Reviews

Community Reviews(6)

• MwisRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Great story and great start. I like this kind of McCulloch where they ain't some good guys or some stuck up prick. Keep writing cause you are doing great.
• DonhenRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  Good beginning to the story. I think its nice to start with an MC who is already off his rocker and willing (even already considering) to kill people.
  Starts a bit slow and low on the power scale. We'll see how it builds up from here. The dungeon minion points cost seems off. Once the MC gets to higher lifeforms and humanoids, it seems like the points cost will be very high. Perhaps the costs will rescale as he moves up the food-chain.
  Grammar is decent, but vocabulary could use some work, mostly I noticed correctly spelled but wrong words.
  Overall I like it so far and looking forward to more.
• BullerRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  I read this one on Amazon... so long ago. It was one of the first actual things I paid real money for. Not that I like the fact that I paid money for it, since it's something I didn't actually finish. MC was a bit of a... eastern-MC. Psychopathic 'but it's okay because he had his reason' type of thing. I could never actually understand why he was written in this way but whatever. I'll just give this a 4/5
• RznRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 3.5

  Stumbled across this and saw that this was sort of a stub for the book, though it seems that it is no longer on Amazon either. Wanting to try a dungeon core novel, this one here was one of the ones that popped up and this gets dark very quick with an MC that is already homicidal before the start. A disturbing opening and nothing else remains here, but aside from a very dark opening this wasn't written badly - though the prose could use an edit.
• kspnRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 3.5

  I am enjoying this book, it is interesting and kinda shows a good variation of 'office worker snaps with a gun'
  I like it :-)
• ContradictionRoyal Road

  ★★★ 2.5

  I can honestly say I don't like this story. It's about a petty dick that goes on a murdering spree.l as a dungeon core. If there was some point, maybe I could give a damn. But there isn't. He's just a vindictive asshole. I can't empathize with him at all, or care about him. From a technical view, no glaring faults. Grammar was solid. The whole get your creatures back after 36 hrs seems like a glaring plot hole just cuz it's cheat as fuck.
  Again, this is only as of ch. 9. 1 star if you need more than senseless slaughter to enjoy a story, 2.5 stars if you don't care, 3.5 if you're some sort of sick fuck. Maybe its just too early, but it's quite boring reading a story with no direction other than "kill them all".