ReBirth of The Primordial
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Io and her siblings died in an apocalyptic storm and were reborn into a world filled with wonder and monsters.In order to survive, they explore their new world, learning how not to just survive in a world lush with life but filled with more new dangers.
*I am massively irritated with this novel so I have taken it down in order to rework it. To all that took the time to read and offer feedback, I sincerely thank you for helping me to grow to be a better author.
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- Hiatus
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- RedsFables
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- luda305Royal Road★★★★ 4.0Io is in her mid-teens, and her adopted siblings are both fairly young (their is well-written and childlike, which may bother some readers). They live in a dystopian, environmentally wrecked Earth and, when they are killed by a storm, they are reborn as non-humans in a fantasy world. I think the plot is "survivalist," but that's not entirely clear. Though, I do get the feeling that there is a strong theme on their familial bonds.
There are some structural issues. I appreciate the start in media res, and the isekai experience itself (the confusion) is well done. That said, to build background, the story suddenly launches into flashbacks but seems to get lost in them for quite a while, never quite returning to the present or even acknowledging that it's still in flashback mode. While the in media res is good, it probably makes more sense here to reorder it so that it's chronological and the isekai doesn't happen until chapter 10 or whatever.
The background is also like melodramatically dystopian and grimdark. Like, almost unbelievably so. It's not quite "I'm the world's greatest assassin and got reincarnated as a baby," but it's close.