Rebirth Of Civilization

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Status

Hiatus

Author

princepablo

Reviews

Community Reviews(10)

• moredreadRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  The plot is pretty basic. Guy gets pulled into another world that has a system.
  At the point im reviewing this it's still very early so the meat of the story hasn't come out yet. So far the MC hasn't had any interactions with anyone but wolves yet, but it's a lot of fun. It's just survival and crafting traps. I love these types of stories though.
  Looking forward to seeing how this turns out.
• Frost_RuneRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  As of chapter 11 there are some details that already need to be addressed. Such as the phone not working, like does electricity not function? This can be explained by magic interfering I guess. The main character also doesn't seem to have any remorse for the world ending. Avoiding grief is understandable but even an attempt to forget or ignore grief isn't mentioned. A lack of empathy isn't great in a main character. Even if besides this he's empathetic and normal, which makes it seem more like a plot hole. The rest of the story isn't that bad at all and rather wonderful. The world building and magic is where the story shines. The lack of any guiding hands or for shadowed b.s. tropes is also pleasant to see. Those ruin stories so easily. I think this will be a story that can only be great by sheer volume of material. Like the Azeranth Healer in a way. Just needs to steadily build itself up. Pacing is near perfect as he's struggled but enough build up. Maybe take some time to build the character itself up but not so much focus to derail the story. All in all I'm glad this is being written and look forward to wasting my free time reading it and contemplating. Good job man keep it up.
• Kilogram60Royal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  The story starts out with a solo character in a world where the skills are more improved intuition that Insta craft. I found this to be interesting but slower to progress as so much trial and error was processed.
  The chapters are quite long so you get a solid read in. I would recommend this story
  The style of writing is very much to my liking as it focuses on a single character and their experiences. Not zooming around multiple charts from all directions.
  The story is not overly original and the world building so far is fairly limited.  Grammar is fine with the occasional typo etc but not immersion breaking. Character development is minimal to this point and more focused on stat enhancement.
• MadGodRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  The only mistake the author has made for this story so far is in its description. He should have just mentioned that it's a crafting focused novel and not story/charater driven and instead of casual readers complaining that it's plain, he'd have the crafting nuts drooling over it, like how it happened with Magic Smithing.
  Basically, it's all about a guy in the woods bushcrafting, researching rune magic and base building, with some ocasional fighting in-between and slow leveling.  And this is all you need to know to decide whether this is the story for you not.
  Don't go around downvoting stuff just because you don't like the genre.
• GwKilbyRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Really enjoying the crafting focus and pace of the story - nice progression and very interesting skill sets being developed by MC.
  Author is taking great care to develop the MC over time and the progression has good logic (to me at least).
  chapter length is good; overall the story is developing well and hoping to learn more about the world the author is building and the MC.
  Grammar is good as is spelling; very well done for a self professed first author - dude has talent!
  looking forward to seeing where the author takes this little gem.
• RivetRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  I enjoy the focus toward crafting rather than to the levels and the magic system. It gives me the same feelings as when reading Hatchet or similar stories. The pace is nice, not too fast, but with an interesting indirect magic system. There are no casting fireballs or arcane lightnings, but an indirect rune system that focuses on the materials used. Great story, and something I could easily devour 100 chapters of.
• CalaventeRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  For the moment it's a guy surviving and earning levels in the woods...
  a few odd moments where more exigent people may find that woodworking or blacksmithing shouldn't be as easy (even if MC spends days on it)...
  but the concept of a physical class and a magical "class" is interesting.
  and the MC stumbling on a rare magical craft makes for a future explosive growth... as it's supposed to happen, we don't follow a predetermined guy which gets too much luck due to being the MC, we follow, out of the many that were isekaied, one of The Rare Guys that were lucky enough to get a boosted start...
  it's worth the read !
• EldestDaoistBruhRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  Engaging and fun, a good effort has been put in this story and it shows in every paragraph. Although slow and perhaps in need of more characters it is nonetheless excellent in both story, style and grammar. More world-building is certainly needed but it will probably be a bit slow. Altogether an excellent story that is worth more than just a read.
• assasinRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  disclaimer; this was done as part of a review swap
  The story starts of very slow but I love the premise. Too many litrpgs are focused solely on progression fantasies and ignore the fun stuff like an interesting crafting system. Plus I definitely prefer ones focused more on exploration,discovery and survival.
  The grammar and vocabulary is impecable and outside of the very slow pace I see nothing wrong with the style.
  The magic system and worldbuilding is interesting enough that it doesn't come across as another generic litrpg. There's a certain je ne sais quoi that appeals to me that I think a lot of them lack. I think it's because every discovery is a real effort of sweat and, sometimes literal, blood and not just a gift from the author.
  My one complaint is the main character is very bland. But I think that can easily be addressed as the story progresses. Especially once more characters are added to the story so there's some actual character growth through dialogue and interpersonal relationships. Way too many litrpgs fall into the same trap. There's too much focus on one character in the beginning and it gets very tiresome to see the same cliche over and over again.
• Luis Ramon Sierra FloresRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  Well, this is the first time that I have found so many similarities between authors.
  This is a story about a crafter/warrior, the story focus 80% of the time on crafting and developing himself,15% on Fighting monster to level up,5% on the world around him.
  And it just Works... somehow, now please understand this is a very niche type of novel that does not work for everyone, some people might find it boring, or too slow, there is no OP from the start MC, the MC is not a genius, he fucks up from time to time (Spoiler alert: Don't mix air with fire dumbass), and there is no grand objective so far, the MC thinking pattern is like an engineers mind, he breaks problems in steps and works his way to solve each one by one.
  Grammar is Ok!
  The bad: The author needs to learn how to use Blue Boxes, or find a way to show the status that it's more friendly for the reader. He really needs to add some side characters into the story, we are at chapter 11 and so far the MC only interacts with his mind, if he is going to take this stance, then making sure the MC develops a speech problem because of his lack of talking would be a way to go.
  I have added the story to my follow list, and I plan on staying until the end.