Rebirth in a Magical World

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Description

What would you do if you were reborn inside the Harry Potter Universe. Follow Alexander Fawley's adventures as he is reborn in the Harry Potter world. In this tale, he will have new unique adventure to call his own, And he will discover that the Harry Potter Universe is much greater than he had imagined.P.S This is my first story, so please leave reviews, to let me know how I am doing, so I can get better. Also J.K. Rowling owns Harry Potter, I simply play in her world.

On a side note, I am curently re-editing the first half of the story. So, you might see grammer mistakes. I am working on fixing the problems, if you can push through to the chapter thirty-five ish the grammer improves alot becuase White Wind has been editing my mistakes.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2019
Author: Flying JMW

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Rating: 4.6/ 5.0
Followers: 5,328
Views: 3,864,077

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Community Reviews(10)

sdam86Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
By far the best SI centric fic in the fandom. The best thing the author did was place distance between Harry's story and the SI. Too many authors want to be apart of Harry's adventures. The author has done an outstanding job creating an OC who has his own original and interesting story completely separate from everything Harry, Ron and Hermione go through. At some point I'm sure Alex will have to start inching towards interfering. Unsure if he's going to aim for that Order of Merlin by capturing Wormtail or winning the Tri-Wizard Tournament tho :P
I really enjoy the exploration of the HP world and that the author has kept the magic within bounds of what Rowling wrote. The SI, while clearly on the road towards being a "Dumbledorian" type wizard, has believable growth in powers. Dumbledore was getting published as a student and Voldemort made a Horcrux as a teenager. I imagine Alex will be in that same talent bracket.
The author had also succeeded at the most difficult thing in story's like this. Making the secondary characters likable and believable. Alex's mom and dad are well written and his relationship with his friends doesn't feel forced.
What else... no bashing! Snape and Dumbledore are written well for once and not as caricatures. The Hogwarts teachers actually teach and are competent. Clearly the author made the decision to avoid all of the fandom pitfalls.
I eagerly await more chapters!
Omnis RaRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
The story was well done. I have been a huge Harry Potter fan and loved this story. The characters are well done and the story draws you.
cloud.Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
It was better than the real Harry Potter books that I couldn't get into. It's so interesting and I am now depressed because the author hasn't posted in a month. I love the book tho. (Next repeated words to fill the word quota) It was better than the real Harry Potter books that I couldn't get into. It's so interesting and I am now depressed because the author hasn't posted in a month. I love the book tho.It was better than the real Harry Potter books that I couldn't get into. It's so interesting and I am now depressed because the author hasn't posted in a month. I love the book tho.It was better than the real Harry Potter books that I couldn't get into. It's so interesting and I am now depressed because the author hasn't posted in a month. I love the book tho.It was better than the real Harry Potter books that I couldn't get into. It's so interesting and I am now depressed because the author hasn't posted in a month. I love the book tho.It was better than the real Harry Potter books that I couldn't get into. It's so interesting and I am now depressed because the author hasn't posted in a month. I love the book tho.
hokolomopoRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This is without a doubt a really good story. The story happens in the Harry Potter universe, but the author expend this univers instead of just following the books. One of my favorites things that this fiction does is that it explains a bit more the magic system of Harry Potter, instead of just the "shake your wand around and say a magic formula" of the books.
FlavorTownRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Going into this story was a bit of a rollercoaster at first, based on reviews I had rather high expectations but seeing the rather mediocre grammar quickly lowered them.
Yet as I read I found myself blown away by how far beyond this exceeded what I was expecting! the author (not to be rude) is some random dude with no other works and hasn't even been on RR a year and yet he manages to weave fascinating Harry Potter lore and a perfect portrayal of the characters we've all seen in the books into a quality story that remains both unique, lore and timeline friendly and most importantly forces you the spend hours binging the story only to be crushed that you've reached the latest chapter!
I might be a bit excessive saying this, but I believe that with good grammar this story might even contend with the works of Lone or L. Nimbus.
GooNieRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Like the title says, you don't need to be a Harry potter fan to read this. Sure their are some characters that are in this that are in the books as well but I just look at it like a bonus to those of us that have read them. The characterization of the characters we all know and love are enjoyable, while keeping true to the books. The mc is a likeable kid whose not op but is obviously a prodigy when it comes to magic, but he works hard for it and he plans carefully instead of relying on plot armor. He's got his own adventures (which are actually interesting) instead of relying on the main plot of the books but it takes place around the same time, (the mc is Fred and George Weasleys age, also Cedric's, whose his best friend so that's fun) so I'm sure we'll see him get involved in some of Harry's shenanigans somewhere down the line.
I don't usually write reviews because I'm a terrible writer and tend to ramble but I felt like helping out as much as I can because I want this to succeed and I'm genuinely think other people will enjoy this.
The pacing is good and the chapter release seems fast. My only gripe is the vocab (I am by no means a grammar snob) it can be a little jarring from time to time but doesn't interfere with the story and it's something I can look past.
All in all check it out. I haven't read any other Harry potter fanfics but I just might if they are half as interesting as this one. Keep up the good work author sama.
rodrigonnsRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
The characters are humans and not pieces of paper, the world is not only England and Hogwarts and the story is NOT just a different pov of the books. The MC is also an amazing character. He isn't a perfect person ( not even close, you will see ) but he is by far the better MC I've come across in any hp fanfic. He makes mistakes, gets lucky AND unlucky, loses AND wins and, most importantly, isn't just a badass sadboy or a softie. He is a smart person who loves himself and knows himself (or so it seems ). He has already grown alot since the beginning of the story and I'm waiting to see him by the end of school! Lastly, the protagonist isn't some strange child during his childhood, one of those that should be creep the fuck out of everyone. He is just a normal, even if a little smarter child, who laughs, plays and gets picked on by adults.
But I shall warn you: the grammar leaves something to be desired... While it isn't the worst I've come across, it certainly isn't fantastic, especially in older chapters. The good news are that in the recent ones it is way better, which makes the story even more enticing.
Finally, I would like to say that oh boy is magic cool! I love the way the writer has explained magic and all the other subjects, specially the ancient runes and it's uses.
Overall a fantastic story, can't wait for more chapters! ( UPDATE MORE!!!!! )
NinjaBeanRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
For now, it doesnt change original story too much and there is a little interaction with original main characters. It has a world of its own. It's exciting Harry and his friends, but this would have spoiled the story and and killed it's future if the original script had been greatly impacted from the start.
As for the hiatus state, Writer said he has been busy but he wants to continue the story. You can check his discord channel for updates.
runningslothRoyal Road
★★ 1.5
Alex, a 15 year old reincarnates as a baby in the Harry Potter universe. The story then makes his 5 year old friend get a crush on him. By the time he is 26, two 12 year olds have a crush on him, and the author says it’s okay because he hasn’t been biologically a full adult yet, even though he has lived for 26 years.
Aside from that, the daily grind we can see Alex doing to take advantage of his future knowledge is pretty fun. Unfortunately, all the conflicts fall flat because they center around some dude who scammed his new grandpa. There are some cool sides to this story, but I could not get over the disgusting portrayal of reincarnation being an opportunity to take advantage of children.
FudgeRoyal Road
★ 0.5
Grammar and spelling errors abound.. missing words completely, in many cases. Lazy attempts at adding characters from HP universe, making no effort to use them for anything other than exposition, adding no personality whatsoever. Author does not correct mistakes. Main character has a bit too much going for him for anything he does to feel earned.