Rebirth: Dragon

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Description

In the future, death is only the beginning. A newly deceased person wakes up as dragon in a digital afterlife. After the traumas of his previous life wipe away most of his memory, he must rely on those around him to help him find his way. When a raid ends in his kidnapping and imprisonment, he realizes his new life might be even worse than his last, and this time death can't save him.

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Information

Status: Ongoing
Year: 2023
Author: Razziel

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Rating: 4.3/ 5.0
Followers: 118
Views: 10,824

Chapters(4 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

Sebastian HruntingRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This little gem of a story was quite fun to read, it did take off like a bat outta hell... there was enough of a plot to enjoy, the MC was well played for how this particular story was written and if the story did go on further I'd hope for more character development. The lead female was a bit of a one dimensional person in my opinion but I think that was good for this story. The BBEG of this story was on par for a big baddy here and the hatred and rivalry was a bit short lived. There was more world development than I expected and that was a pleasant surprise for me, normally short stories like this has a lot less of World Building in my experience.
All in all... Not bad at all!
WaifuBucketRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
As of this review I"ve read through what I consider to be the opening arc. Basically everything the summary introduces and a bit. Like the title of my review says, I'm interested to see where this goes.
The main character is a dragon and It seems the author intends to follow an actual dragon path as opposed to just making the main character blitz towards a human form. That's the impression I'm getting anyways. There seems to be a good bit of thought towards the evolution path of a growing dragon.
Unfortunately there isn't a whole lot to hold onto as far as world and character details. Don't get me wrong, there are plenty of characters introduced and at least one faction has been set up. is just that things so far have felt a bit.. lacking in perspective(?) The main character is essentially an amnesiac, and with only him to view the world through I end up feeling a little lost. I want to know more, but there aren't many avenues to get all that information. Most other characters just know things the main character doesn't. It leaves his perspective less comprehensive than It feels like it should be. I get the sense that the upcoming arc might help with some of those concerns. I will say I hope that we will get a chance to see certain characters in some form again in the future.
I am a little concerned about a few elements that have been introduced. I won't be too specific but it has to do with the fact that the world is technically a game world. If I'm perfectly honest, I'm here for the dragons much moreso than the litrpg. I will just say I hope the focus is more on the dragon stuff than the gamelit back end. Though I am not all that opposed to exploring that stuff on some level.
If I had one somewhat unfair gripe it would be how short the chapters are. I feel like 2 or 3 chapters should really just be one. Given how often the author has been updating though I can't really complain. Honestly, not really my place to tell the author how to plan that sort of stuff ou