Reawaken Monarch

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Description

The Great Monarch Ilarion who United the sentient races in their fight for existence against Angels and Humans and was shackled after having his physical body destroyed has broken free from the dimensional prison. In preparation for a great war against the Angels and their human puppets and to avenge his comrades and fallen brethren he has to obtain a physical body from another world. He transmigrates to Earth into the body of Son Il-sung.

Unbeknownst to him, he enters a world, where mighty beings were scheming to hold their so called 'Game', apparently for the benefit of humanity.

This is the beginning of a long ride.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2022
Author: BlueSpear

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.3/ 5.0
Followers: 15
Views: 5,750

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Community Reviews(2)

SuperJadeRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I really like the way the story headed so far, I had some reservations on the direction of the story and felt the character wasn't provided proper background, I see that chapter 4 has brought these issues to close.
The magical technology aspect and soft SciFi elements that are yet to appear but are hinted, really makes me excited.
I can't for the story setup to unravel fully in the coming chapters. I thought the grammar and language were good, but I can clearly see that you improved further, chapter 4 is even better.
I thing that I want improved is the interaction between the MC and others around him, they were barely present, and those that were only serves to propel the story forward. You should go back and expand the interaction he has with other characters, so we can get a feel for what the MC is like.
More inner monologue would be helpful for the MC, if possible I would suggest you add some in the previous chapters after the key 'interactions'.
One final suggestion would be to use more emotives I see that you added some in chapter 3 and 4, increase it for the coming chapters.
All in all, very good so far, and plenty of potential, you should stick to it and keep updating it regularly. Also don't be very bothered about view counts and reader counts, you should enjoy the process and don't keep view counts as your main motive.
All the best.
(edit : even though you had the Litrpg tag, I wasn't sure, since I couldn't see how it would come up. Good job on chapter 5, This is getting even better, I love stories with game elements.)
RedgumRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
Reviewed at ch.2
Its pretty early for a review but with two chapters released i might as well.
I feel like this could be a great slice of life story concept, something like 'Great demon lords everyday school life' or something similar. Sadly it seems to be going down a slightly awkward wish fulfilment path.
The author definitely has potential, will wait for more chapters and see