RE: Young Master

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2019

Author

Fate Trickster

• Chapter 5
  Jan 8, 2020
• Chapter 4
  Aug 12, 2019
• Chapter 3
  Jun 4, 2019
• Chapter 2
  May 27, 2019
• Chapter 1
  May 23, 2019
• Prologue( patch 0.1.0)
  May 22, 2019

Reviews

Community Reviews(10)

• BullerRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  I remember reading this, with only the first three chapters out. It was good stuff back then, just as it is now, and I knew that it could grow to be so much more. That never happened, sadly, but there was still five whole chapters to enjoy. Characthers reached the point where they were introduced, a system of sorts was introduced, and the plot began to start up. Good stuff, but never enough to really judge it too hard. 5/5
• FreedomsRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  It's really good and interesting at the same time but as this is just the begining of it, I cannot really give it my full opinon on this matter so keep up the good work.
• Jekke604Royal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  good story with good grammar what more do you want?
• MezhanosRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  The story is still in its infancy and so nothing definite can be said as of now. Howeever based on the chapters that has been released so far ( ch 6 ) the story is fun to read, has a good pace and a MC who doesnt have shit for brains. Absolutely loving it so far and cant wait for the story to truly take off.
• Psyren1596Royal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  The story is really good and it slightly deviates from the norm. I have also not noticed any grammatical errors. Overall a great start to a promising novel.
• Thall230Royal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Loving this story please keep up the good work.
• kspnRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  This is a good read, it is a conecpt that grabbed me and made me wish that there was more of the book out to read.
  I also liked the 'leveling concept' that is in the story.
  Looking forward to reading more, keep up the good work!
• YoshaRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  Keep it up. Good story uptill now, I hope you continue.
• TorffyRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  It is a story with a lot of potential.
  Though a bit more character development and a reaktion to his change of heart
  are necessary.
  But it still is a good story and an enjoyable read.
• GaiadarkstarRoyal Road

  ★★★ 2.5

  I don't really understand why this is rated so highly by so many.  The idea was sort of interesting but so much of the martial arts aspect of wuxia type novels is totally absent in this.  He uses guns to easily gain points and even gains points from his food to buy cheat abilities.  He doesn't work hard or cultivate or anything and easily gains whatever he wants.
  The world feels small despite it being sci fi and made up of multiple worlds but I barely have any feeling of what the area around where he is is like and it feels like there are maybe three or four people in the whole world, the mc, Lisa, and maybe the blacksmith guy.  We never see his family or hear about where they are or what they are doing.
  Everything is just entirely too easy for him and I found it tiresome to keep reading.  Oh I want to do this ok get a gun shoot something it's dead and now I get what I want.  NO real excitement or worry for the MC.  It just feels so superficial and empty.  I just don't get why so many like this novel so much.  I think the concept could work but I think that the author should concentrate on a simpler concept first and get more experience with just wuxia or just sci fi before trying to combine them.
  A system is fine if it is paired with some kind of work to get the points in the first place.  And I don't mean you get cheat skill right off the bat and one shot everything.  Having a MC slowly struggle and really fight to grow makes it so much more satisfying when they do something cool.  Watch the Gabriell character from "Xena warrior Princess" for an excellent example.  There are other good ones like Randidly from "The Legend of Randidly Ghosthound" he gets some advantages but he legitimately works and trains extremely hard to get better.