I saw no shining light at the end of the tunnel.

Instead, I became one.

And although I am for now just a glowing orb of turquoise light, I get much respect from my elves. Or, should I say, my dungeon minions?

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punaRoyal Road

★★★★★ 4.5

This story has a very good flow, and is enjoyable to read. Thanks for wrighting.

BoredBeyondBeliefRoyal Road

★★★★ 4.0

Interesting story, has moderate grammar but author should focus on longer chapters instead of going 5.1-5.2-5.3 and instead just do 5 with all of those combined.
and by combined i don't just mean copy and paste, but instead make a flow or time skips.

Unknownsaint171Royal Road

★★★ 3.0

It’s a decent story. A bit too fast when in the beginning it was good, should had built up a bit more and explain more things before he was captured...
Sometimes I have no idea whose narrating or if it’s a different POV so I always had to double check in the latest chapters. The word fan fiction comes out often, is this a fan fiction? Kinda confuse. Is there another ‘Player’? I can’t tell if it’s literally information or if your just breaking the 4th Wall here.. These are just few examples.
I feel like jerk saying that it needs to be rewritten when you uploaded this not long ago...But yeah this is my honest criticism. I’ll keep in touch with this Novel as it’s still to soon to judge completely

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