RE:God

Self-Published

Community Rating

Description

The Gods, always playing their games, but wait arent I one. Let this be a warning to my children, do not play when you have work.

Now let's take a quick smoke break. Being a God is hard work yaknow.

Wow, would you look at that i'm writing this again, looks like I stressed out. Hope you enjoy the new chapters ill be pushing.

Leader of PenDragon (old Scribble).

Writer of: The King of Avarice, Metior, and Memories in Pergatory.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2015
Author: Nah Ava

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.2/ 5.0
Followers: 54
Views: 49,186

Chapters(13 total)

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Community Reviews(3)

Mr. BubblesRoyal Road
★★ 2.0
I didn't like it. There was no real plot and it felt like it was written by a 5 year old.
Sorry, but I wouldnt recommend it.
Still, dont mind me, you just keep being you and write this...story.
FlashfyreRoyal Road
★★ 1.5
The title of this review explains everything there is to know about this sotry, but I decided I need to at least spell out what is wrong. First, the story is extremely one dimensional, with no personality and minions always going "yes master" like emotionless dolls. It feels more like the author just wants some mindless minions for themself, not that I blame them, but mindless minions would get real annoying real fast.
The story progression follows the format of "I do this, this happens, now you do this, now i respond" with a very low level of dialogue, however bad it is I do respect the authors fundamental grasp of grammar. However I believe they should polish their ability to progress a story to being 3 dimensional and immersive in another story, this one is just not cut out to the task.
RJCastaRoyal Road
★ 1.0
I'm not sure what to make of this. You've asked for reviews, so I'm giving one.
First, your grammar needs some serious work. You don't even take the time to correct misspellings.
Your premise is alright. I haven't read a story before where the MC becomes a god of a planet. I've always liked world building games like this so thought it might be interesting, but I couldn't get beyond the style and grammar problems.
Recommendation to the author: no writers that want to be taken seriously publish work without taking the time to at least self-edit.
And write more words. If you weren't the author of this work and you picked it up and read it, would you like it?