[Re] Cultivating the Universe

The Universe is vast and infinite. A being Controls the Universe. He chooses many souls and makes them reincarnate in different worlds. This is the story of the favorite soul of the being

Hi guys. This is re-written version of my first story that I am writing and I am a complete beginner at it.I am gonna take some ideas from other novels and fan fictions.

So any advices about my fan fiction are appreciated and I hope you guys could help me. I will try to reply to as many comments as I can.

Hope you enjoy it