Re:Absorb

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2017

Author

GodAxe

• 5. An adventurer - A start of the adventure
  May 11, 2018
• 4. An adventurer - A level up
  May 11, 2018
• 3. An adventurer - Character card
  May 10, 2018
• 2. An adventurer
  May 10, 2018
• 1. Prologue
  May 9, 2018
• Prologue
  Jun 21, 2017

Reviews

Community Reviews(6)

• Re:WriterRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  To use blue screens, click table, then insert, then click the boxes. You can expand and contract them when you want.
• TyckaRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  So far so good, it has a great potential. Mainly because of personality of protagonist, he has a ability which helps him a lot and he uses it and don't really care about morals ( well he does but he still does that to stay alive) and I really like that he uses all means to kill others for his own benefit's. I suggest to keep MC personality like that because it's really rare to find novel with that kind of MC. So keep this up and don't change MC into naive loving and caring idiot. And it will one of the best fictions I have ever read.
• TheHoblitRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  first 5 chapters review:
  great start! I love that the MC is crazy, or insane by circumstance. it is hard to properly write a twisted mind so i look forward to seeing more. I look forward to more backstory on how he came to get to where he is now, and what his goal is.
• Pancake_lvl.1Royal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  Hello There XD
  Well, the story is certainly interesting though not many so I guess it has a lot of potentials but it needs a little more kick to it.
  Style can definitely improve but as it is similar to many writers it's quite easier to read... so it's your choice
  Grammer is certainly good with very few mistakes here and there...
  The character is pretty interesting also but I guess you'll need more characters... try to get more chapters.
  I'll make another review at a later date.
• BinLoxRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 3.5

  You really need to Google proper comma usage, author. Stopped reading in chapter 1.
• D.J. RintoulRoyal Road

  ★ 1.0

  I recommend doing as the author says and not reading this abandoned story.
  The writing style is basic to the point of feeling like a deliberate joke, a mockery of the writing process. The author initially planned to rewrite this, it seems, but abandoned it in the end.
  The narrative of the one chapter that does exist is incoherent, to put it nicely. There's a main character who's apparently an evil genius billionaire whose wife cheated on him, and he wants to destroy the world over it. So he does.
  Yeah, it's that kind of story. The character (not characters, because there's really only one) is one-dimensional. He has the single trait of being obsessed with his wife, who was his childhood sweetheart.
  Writing is not entirely incomprehensible at a spelling and grammar level, but there are a surprising number of errors, especially considering that in a note, the author claimed he was going to rewrite this. I'm more or less certain that never happened. Perhaps a second look would have changed this into something more readable. At the least, the author has some imagination and knowledge of the concept of a System-based world, so there's clearly a genre he had in mind while making this this up, albeit that we saw very few trappings of it in the single published chapter.