Raining Diner. #huddlerscontestentry
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#huddlercontestentry.
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- Status
- Completed
- Year
- 2018
- Author
- MrZombie
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- Rating
- 2.2/ 5.0
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- 2
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- 596
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- RznRoyal Road★★★ 2.5This piece would have been a little more understandable and clearer if the ending resolved some questions instead of being vague about the situation they find themselves in. The mismatch in the situation comes from the difference in ages, but at the same time we are not given much of a concrete answer and have to infer that the MC is probably 17-18 at the time and that this is not surrealist fiction. It makes sense in a way, but the threads are a bit minimal and some of the awkwardness coming from the MC is distracting to the theme and tone.