Rain of Sorrow

Self-Published

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Description

In the age of Enlightenment there is no room for ancient and decaying systems. The four Estates were abolished and replaced the System of Reason.

But Reason in the hands of man has it's limits. Soon Man will fine new reasons for their Evil. Creating a Strom of Madness that threats the stability of the world itself.

But are not following the Storm we are following the ones trying to escape it.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2024
Author
Scarlet Silver Iron

Tags

SATIREFANTASYADVENTUREMAGICHISTORICALMULTIPLE LEAD CHARACTERSDYSTOPIA

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Rating
2.5/ 5.0
Followers
7
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302

Chapters(2 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • ATYZMARoyal Road
    ★★★ 2.5
    Scarlet,
    Your first chapter in ‘Rain of Sorrow’ ties in well with the book synopsis.
    The staging and immediate jump into the violent core shows the opposing sides clearly, and identifies the protagonists even without direct description.
    It’s a good strong start that drew me in, but I kept getting distracted by the grammatical errors, punctuation issues and spelling mistakes- maybe English isn’t the first language, or just proofreading and running the text through Google docs, or Microsoft Word with their spell check and grammar checkers should help with this issue.
    I suggest putting conversational text in between “commas” to show whether it’s part of a conversation or a story continuation.
    Unless this is a stylistic format unique to this book? In which case, it’s fine.
    That’s all really. Keep grinding!
    Atyzma