Ragna

Self-Published

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Description

This is a story of a space explorer reincarnated as a 4 year old kid in a world where magic exists as Ragna Windsor.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2016
Author
BisdakNaManunulat

Tags

ACTIONFANTASYADVENTURECOMEDYDRAMASCI-FISUPERNATURALMARTIAL ARTSMULTIPLE LOVERSROMANCE SUBPLOT

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.1/ 5.0
Followers
381
Views
124,527

Chapters(28 total)

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Community Reviews(4)

  • lorenzo86Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    This fiction is a real joy to read although is still in the begenning stages I have alot of expectations for this fiction . The main caracter brings magic though an orginal concept , I hope that the author keeps surprising me .
  • TasonRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    Grammar has a  few faults  that aren’t too bad or affecting on the story, just minor errors from one who’s first language isn’t english and in regards to that does a very fine job at managing it with only slight errors that can easily be fixed over time as the author builds up more experience with the language.
    Since the story itself as well as its flow isn’t harmed by the slight errors in grammar I’ll go with a 3 1/2 star rating for it for now with the solid intent on raising down the road as the author improves.
    Easy to read and follow, small errors in no way or form prevent/cause trouble understanding the story.
    The style of the story so far is quite interesting. As all know there’s many stories that follow this cliche format, but also as most should know each one is usually unique in there own ways and this authors story is starting too show itself as a truly unique one indeed.
    Solid 4 stars for now for the style thanks to the  over all flow and smoothness the author brings  about while writing it.
    The story is still young and early into itself so I’ll stick with a 3 1/2 star for now and wait for it to build itself more with more chapters, will very likely be raising this ranking down the road.
    The character is interesting, unique in his own ways with some side characters, not many after all its  just started, that add some humor to the story. Loved how the character has come about fixing his flaws that hinder his future possibilities and cannot wait to see what else he’ll do!
    Solid 4 stars for the character rating for now, will check back later on with more chapters to see if its needs a raise or drop.
    Over all, shows signs of being a  unique and intriguing new story with the ability to stand on its own  rather then just sticking to the long used and cliche format.
    Well done to the author at the moment, well done indeed.
  • dwoolfyRoyal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    There are a great many concepts that are found in this story that are very commonly found in other similar types of stories.  The main problem that I see here is that the author seems to have not really taken the time to flesh out his world and the rules in it.  The world system that the author created is an ultra simplified version of many of the complex systems that have been developed on RR.
    It seems as if the author had an idea based on several other stories and threw together a bunch of concepts and started writing.  It is not particularly bad, but there is a bunch of problems in the story.  Going from the setting of the interstellar war and dying as part of it, then jumping over to reincarnation is just one odd design choice.
    I can't really recommend this story as it is currently written, but I suppose with a great deal of work the author could reboot it into something that works better.  Also the writing style of the author is not bad at all as far as I am concerned.
  • ILoveAnimeRoyal Road
    ★★★ 2.5
    Basic story, spacing and grammar seems good. Unique spell system is also cool. But story needs some tweaking to make sense.
    Game "system" in this story just doesn't. basically it can somehow list numerical values to stats that are almost impossible or impossible to rate unless your some kind of near omnipotent being. Also there "level" won't measure or mean anything unless world itself has level system. Not to mention who would willingly put some "dings" in his head he could easily do without.
    I mean how come his system magically even gets history of objects and negative statuses?
    Unless this big plot hole is fixed I find it impossible to read this.
    Normally I don't have any problem with gamelike systems but for him to create this himself is impossible.