Raak

Self-Published

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Description

James was in his 30's when his death came suddenly, not that he minded much, as life was seeming to drag on.

His story, however, did not end with his death.

As a point of fact, it had only just begun.

This will be my first work, so please by all means comment with any errors I may have made. Suggestions for the story (which may or may not be used). This is a litrpg and a bit of a power fantasy, so be warned the protagonist will be pretty OP eventually.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2017
Author
Crimeus

Tags

LITRPGFANTASYMAGICCOMEDYSLICE OF LIFEMULTIPLE LOVERSSTRONG LEADMALE LEADNON-HUMAN LEADREINCARNATION

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Rating
4.5/ 5.0
Followers
1,744
Views
263,848

Chapters(16 total)

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Community Reviews(10)

  • DonutDaddyRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Love the book, easily one of my top 10 favorites on this site. The character is op but it naturally fits with the story and the flow is on par with extremely experienced authors. Love it and hope to see it reach 4000+ pages  😉
  • Futhark the ElderRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    This is a story about an earth elemental named Raak. I didn't immediately catch the pun, as I'm not American and am accustomed to pronouncing "rock" the way god intended (cough, cough, I mean the way Her Majesty does). Still, after mentally adopting an American accent, the pun amused me, and this enjoyment has lasted through all the available chapters.
    The story is the opposite of a grimdark tale -- there are (at least, as yet) no overwhelming forces of evil against which the protagonist is obliged to battle. I find this a welcome relief. The whole grimdark thing eventually gets tiresome. This story generates enough excitement by its account of the protagonist's levelling his skills, which is exactly the story element that distinguishes litrpg. As an added bonus, this is a story that I can read aloud to my little nephew, who enjoys it just as much as I do.
    The author deserves a compliment for the technical quality of the writing, which is far above the average. My respect, Sir or Madam.
    I (and my nephew) look forward eagerly to the next chapter.
  • KydsdadRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Really like the plotline and the characters are well thought out imo.  to often writers tend to end up with the supporting characters being little more then just being there to be awed by the MC.  That is fine as long as they are actually part of the story and have developed and unique personalities.  These do.  Thank you for an excellent story.  Its been 5 months since its been updated and i hope it continues soon at some point.
  • LowlandCometRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I really love this book and I really hope you continue this story and not drop it. I really enjoy stories that don't have a defined end goal (e.g. Kill the evil king\god and save the world) but more relaxrelaxed and not hurried. I really hope you continue this story.
  • jclivingRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    i am enjoying reading about Raak, Nyssa, Cara, and the rest of your characters.  Nice character development!
  • neon11234Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    The style and plot is refreshing, I'm enjoying the MC and while he has an OP aspect it meshes well with the story.
    I look forward to further interactions with new actors, and it seems that so far the author isn't on the track of ruining the story with childish harams.
    Grammar is to a level where I don't notice any real issues and the MC has a backbone.
    I'd love to see positive relations with the kingdom and perhaps a working relationship. It has the air of adventure and limitless potential.
  • PolmonkRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    Nice build up. Interesting so far. Uncluttered writing. A bit overpowered MC though. But entertaining.
  • kspnRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    My only real issue with the book is that there is only 15 Chapters released at this moment.
    Maybe I should have waited before reading this one, but once reading the premise I couldn't so... well.. *begging for more*
    K
  • PsychoRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    I have mixed feelings about this fiction.
    Author's style is pretty good.
    Story is... in far too easy mode.
    Ability of mc is far too op. By eating leg of ant he more than doubled his stats, can it get even more absurd? It will. In like three days mc from 10 cm piece of stone got times more powerful than human knights and mages.
    Characters are simple and silly.
    Mc does not really have any characteristic, and glad to describe his reincarnation expiriences and cheats with everybody.
  • mrttaoRoyal Road
    ★★★ 2.5
    Spoiler: Spoiler
    a Random Omnipotent Being is bored so she makes the MC go to another world is a really bad premise.
    Then she suddenly is not doing it out of boredom, but because she wants him to beta test this new world she made.
    Then she gave him a ridiculously overpowered cheat which undermines the beta testing purpose. Please give ROB a consistent character and motivation.