Pyramid of Dreams

Self-Published

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Description

On a planet like no other, there lies a mystery unsolvable through the eons.The Voyager, a being of nigh-omnipotent power, stumbles on to this planet to discover that there is much more in the world that he did not know.

Ancient forces asleep since time immemorial begin to awaken as the universe is once more plunged into chaos.Will the Voyager maintain his role of an observer or will he decide to take action, altering the course of all existence?

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Admiral Henitos Glaive has served the Alliance of a Thousand Worlds faithfully for years in the Nine Rings Sector. Yet he is relocated to an edge-world, as manipulated by Lord Astrom, and soon comes to understand that there are many things kept from him.

As these secrets slowly reveal themselves, he must ultimately make a choice: whether to continue serving the Alliance or to abandon them and forge a new path.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2021
Author: Dimetrius_Noir

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.8/ 5.0
Followers: 12
Views: 5,295

Chapters(19 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

SeventhGateRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Overall, the story encompasses the sci fi genre, with elements magic and to an extent space opera. The hidden politics behind the plot are given hints to, without outeight info dumping. So far the concepts are original and the storyline has few clichés, although the plot has just began to really get started
The style is very interesting, with a unique power system. There are no information dumps, and the world building is done pretty well. The desctiptive passages really bring the scenes to life. The battle scenes are also exciting to read. The little snippets at the end of the paragraph really draw you in, leaving hints about the world of the book.
The grammar is good so far, with few typos and errors. Slowly they are being corrected, but unless you actively look for them, you are unlikely to find any.
The characters are well thought out and interesting in general. There are several perspectives from which the story is told and they each approach things with a different attitude which is fun to see.
TL;DR --> a well written plot set on a sci fi stage with magic elements, the plot is well thought out and the characters are interesting. I'd recommend it👍🏽