Puzzle: Theo's Virtual Quest
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Description
Children’s imagination is known to run wild, but Theo’s creative power always seems to have neither boundaries nor limits.
Due to the unableness, to go out and about in society. Theo’s father, Robert, came up with an amusing idea to keep Theo’s fictitious thinking entertained throughout this period of isolation. We journey along with Theo on his Pure Adventure around the house to track down all fifty of the hidden puzzle pieces. Witnessing the numerous difficulties, he comes across in achieving his goal of gathering every puzzle piece to complete the set.
With the aid of an advanced prototype VR headset, Theo found it in the attic where his father had hidden it. Turning Theo’s house into a whole new world to explode with his imaginary friend, Linos, and guides his mind into a Pure Imagination made him travel from feat to feat.
An odyssey that takes him to all kinds of contrasting scenes. Such as a Halloween party, a Caribbean island, a race around the Metropolis of Motor City, and more. He meets a shedload of fascinating characters that gives young Theo life lessons and morals along the mind trip.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2021
- Author
- BooHoo
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.8/ 5.0
- Followers
- 6
- Views
- 2,454
Chapters(11 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- CisleyRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5First of all, this start to your story is good. The grammar is also good, and the characters are likable. Continue the tremendous work with the description.
The father-son dialogue sounds natural since I would probably do stuff like this with my son. Their duel was both fun and thrilling.
I can't wait to read more chapters. I hope you don't give up because I'm loving how it is going so far.
But don't be too descriptive. We know you can describe well, and the way you can change from reality to a whimsical world is impressive, to say the less. Adventure Buddies could have been a novel on its own, to be honest.
You're 17 and already have this level of grammar and storytelling is unreal.
The fact that there are more places to journey to in the novel is also good since it gives readers more to go off on. The story is unique as the mc is a kid, and it so innocent yet, exciting. I can tell it's going to be a ride following this story, so don't get tired or sad because of the low numbers. You're still a teenager, so only look forward to finishing the novel.