Psycho in Naruto
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
Psycho reborn in the Naruto world attempts to make himself the most notorious ninja of them all. Game elements to help the character along the way.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2019
- Author
- cavo
Tags
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.9/ 5.0
- Followers
- 176
- Views
- 12,424
Chapters(8 total)
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Community Reviews(9)
- ParagonStarRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0Seems really good so far. Can't wait to see how this develops.
- ChancesimpRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0I like stories like this so I think it could be good.
- Nefarious FlamesRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0Can’t wait to see where you go with this👏.
- AscendantRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5I love the idea of the evil naruto protagonist and i want more chapters. interested to see where you take this.
- Icecold543Royal Road★★★★★ 4.5I really like this story but please post a little more often or tell us if you are not going to post for a while. I was checking daily cuz I really enjoyed it.
- DarkAphelionRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0First of all it's set long before the events of 'naruto', not too long after the founding of konohagakure so it doesn't clash with the main naruto story. It's enjoyable if you like the reincarnation/ transported to another world with a 'system' type story. Personally I think the character is a little bit over the top and irrational at times but aside from that it's good. Tbh I like this type of ''eincarnated into a fictional world' type story, can anyone recommend any others? On royalroad or fanfiction.com or such.
- pewpewcachooRoyal Road★★ 1.5This is hard to read. Like really hard to read. The writing is not great, the grammar is passable though. Mostly because you write one sentance at a time. You also don't need to use sound effects in the story. I would say keep writing and you will improve, it just takes time.
- SourceRoyal Road★ 1.0Read 14 chapters.
I'll be going against the rest of the reviewers here by saying that this story is really bad. The only good thing about it is the style and grammar, but the story and the character (MC) are terrible.
Our MCs is made out of two things, anger & hatred. There is not a single thread of any other emotions, he's basically just hatred given a body. He views the entire village as cattle waiting to be slaughtered by him. He has no desire to explore the characters in the naruto-verse or meddle in the future events, he exists only so that he can kill people. There are no overreaching plots or schemes, just growing stronger so he can kill more people.
To me, this makes the story very boring and pointless, and I don't recommend it. There are several other fanfics you could and should read instead of this. - Ankur_93Royal Road★ 0.5I started reading it expecting some kind of evil genius that loved killing people but would be smart about it. You know, like a true psychopath, one who hide behind a mask of normalcy but be the most disturbing thing in the world.
Instead I am met with a toddler, yes a toddler, that is killed and is reborn. And that is all you can expect from this story. The MC is the definition of stupid. If you were to look up the word moron in the dictionary, this MC would pop up.
He is that stupid. While author claims that he is smart, He is not, dear author-sama. He is so not.
This is just a massive disappointment.