Provenance (Discontinued, pending re-write)
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
Most of the World bears down on a young renegade after he scorned its ideals by committing several felonies, as part of a mission and in the name of surfacing cryptic memories that aren't his, yet drive his actions. Meanwhile, with her family murdered and no one to turn to, a certain pokémon follows him. Chased across regions and facing constant threats, their decisions are tested.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2021
- Author
- Aether Apostle
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.7/ 5.0
- Views
- 524
Chapters(2 total)
Reviews
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Community Reviews(2)
- BullerRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5There is no way it isnt, right? He winced, "Oh yeah. Sorry about that mate." That has to be proof. Sure, I could only actually find that one quote where it seemed right, and there weren't any points where they said crickey, which was honestly just a missed opportunity.
Anyway. Going over to the part of the review that's actually useful, I would call this story good enough. Only two chapters have been yet to ceom out, yet I still feel I have enough of a grasp on the style to comment on it(though that might also be due to the story having like 10k chapters. damn) While the first chapter is a bit more clunky structure wise, I felt it became pretty decent in the second one. Pacing Is a slight issue but not enough to truly care.
Also forgot to mention the warning in the last bit of the first chapter. I recommend it is read.
4.5/5 for now - Tomato In The StreetRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5The title is a joke... Anyway, I'm sorry If I took long, that's because I only had a free time today, please forgive me, that said, let's go to my review now!
Style: It's just 2 chapter... But like the title said, It's 10K each and the author is probably release bi-monthly so at normal releasing standards, that would be 20 chapters. In short, It's already long enough for a reader to have a grip of the style, the pacing and everything in It, so don't be misled by the low chapter count, because every chapter is filled of density! The style of the novel is pretty straightforward with vivid great descriptions, especially at Chapter 2.
Story: This is a darker version of Pokemon... I love It!!! If you're just looking for a Pokemon fanfic with dark fantasy elements, this Is It for you
Grammar: I'm honestly surprised since this is the first story the author published and It's already brimmed to perfection, It's probably just me because I don't find Grammar Errors distracting, unless It's really awful like super awful.
Character: The main character is probably sympathetic enough for the readers. But I honestly don't like him that much but It's just a personal preference, I just don't like main characters that are "Too cool for school" but others will probably like those.
All in all, I had a great time reading this. That's It for my review and I hope you have a good night! (It's night here right now)