Prophecy of the Elven King
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
My name was Rick Evets at least it was before I died. I spent most of my life studying the human soul. A mistake was made and I reincarnated in a world of magic. The strange thing is they knew I was coming.
Story also contains traces of "Romance".
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2018
- Author
- Protocol
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 215
- Views
- 96,386
Chapters(40 total)
- Ch. 40: Who We Are. Re-edited.Dec 1, 2019
- Chapter 39: Despair. Re-edited.Sep 29, 2019
- Ch. 38: Lineage. Re-edited.Sep 22, 2019
- Ch. 37: The Fall of the First Born. Re-edited.Sep 14, 2019
- Ch. 36: The Day the Mountain Moved. Re-edited.Sep 8, 2019
- Ch. 35: The Storm.Aug 25, 2019
- Ch. 34: The Calm. Re-edited.Aug 18, 2019
- Ch. 33: Life After. Re-edited.Feb 11, 2019
- Ch. 32: Among Friends. Re-edited.Feb 10, 2019
- Ch.31: Hatred of an Evil God. Re-edited.Feb 7, 2019
- Ch.30: My Precious. Re-edited.Jan 30, 2019
- Ch. 29: Flight and Fight. Re-edited.Jan 14, 2019
- Ch. 28: I've Got Class? Re-edited.Jan 7, 2019
- Ch. 27: Of Axes and Adorability. Re-edited.Jan 2, 2019
- Ch. 26: Of Runes and Dragons. Re-edited.Dec 29, 2018
- Ch. 25: Once Unsung. Re-edited.Dec 25, 2018
- Ch. 24: A Necessary Bond. Re-edited.Dec 22, 2018
- Ch. 23: A Necessary Evil. Re-edited.Dec 20, 2018
- Chapter. 22: Like a Diamond. Re-edited.Dec 17, 2018
- Chapter. 21: The Green Children. Re-edited.Dec 17, 2018
Reviews
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Community Reviews(4)
- ObscureReferenceRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0Shows Promise of a deep magic system and uses plenty of tables. Not too much though!
- Benny_FantasticRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0I’m really looking forward to this story
- KitarakDarconRoyal Road★★★★ 3.5I found the story very interesting and I like the directions that you are going. My only complaint is that everything seems to happen real fast and the reader seems like they are just being told about it from someone at a bar and not actually there for the story. I would suggest slowing down and fleshing out the activities that are happening. Don't tell us that everyone was feeling a certain way, show us that they feel that way. Aside from that one aspect I really like it.
- vetedRoyal Road★★ 1.5A cliche and predictable fantasy reincarnation with a plot that used foam padded guiderails, and an MC that was 10 shades of OP. The MC's strength and intelligence were malleable like putty to whatever the plot needed at, whenever it desired. There was a lot of constructive criticism in the comments, but then the story ignored it all and headed towards cliche territory anyway, usually in the form of a forced plot point that disregarded logic or consistency just to get something to happen.
There was a story in there somewhere, but from what was seen, it was entirely too lacking in character agency to be enjoyable. It was also incredibly obvious that the omnipotent author was pulling the strings wherever they willed, rather than letting the story progress in a believable and natural manner.
All in all, it is readable if you love JP WN tropes and cliches, but if you are expecting more, you might not find it here. Many points lost for barelling headfirst into effortless predictability. Sorry if it sounds mean, but forced plot is forced.