Princess Aria and the Gem of immortality
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
This is the story of Brynhilde Von Aria who lost her parents at an early age and has lived on her own for a very long time. she one day finds out there is gem of power that can help here so sets out to find. along the way finds friends to help her in her search. the tale of princess Aria starts here.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2015
- Author
- shatteredlives97
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 5
- Views
- 7,088
Chapters(6 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- kalbobRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0You need to work on the buildings of your sentences, and some of your grammar.
But such things are easy to fix.
The prologue did not feel too much like a prologue, as alot of things seemed to happen in less than half a page. It feels to me as that entire prologue could have been several chapters worth of content.
Well, i am no expert in these matter, as such, do take my word with a bucket of salt.
I look forward to more chapters however!