Primordial Origins

Self-Published

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All the power in the universe, amounts to shit when you've fucked up, and there's no way to undo what has already happened. Even if your the creator of the fucking universe and all its laws and whatnot, those below you must conform to the natural laws that bind them. Even when you want to say 'fuck you' to such laws and break them, you can't because that is how you made the universe and those below you must follow it or they cease to exist in it.I'm tired of having things taken from me because of my mistakes. I've only wanted to live with those I love, but somehow in the universe I created, it decides to fuck me over.I only hope that this time it goes better. Everything seems to be going swell at the moment, but I just can't shake off that feeling that I'm about to get fucked over by myself. I hope when I get the chance to start anew amongst others, everything goes well._____________________________________________________________________________________________Hello, this is my first time attempting to write an original story on Royal Road. I hope you'll enjoy the story as much as I will while writing it. Sorry for any plot holes/ plot armor/ cliche shit because it happens. Anyway there will definitely be foul language and probably some mature scenes, sexual or not. No idea what the release timings will be. Probably whenever I finish a chapter or two and attempted to proofread them.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2015
Author: Darkneostar1

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.7/ 5.0
Followers: 83
Views: 28,460

Chapters(12 total)

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Community Reviews(3)

BrandRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I do not know what stupid piece of shit reader thought he could rate this fiction worse than 4 or 5. Like guys, do you still have your fucking eyes?!
I love it to compare excellent and upcoming novels such as this one with the UTTER SHIT that can sometimes be seen in the Top 5. No, I won’t name them.
But just keep in mind how bad most recent Top 5 fictions are written. And heck, I even saw one give 5 stars in grammar in one of those fictions. Do you even english? (Yes, this is intentionally written this way….)
Those fictions don’t even have any decent grammar or spelling, even the sentence structure is completely messed up; I am repeating myself it seems. In this case though we have a fiction that is fluid and has a brilliant narrative. The reincarnation idea is also implemented in a unique way and I just want to read more.
Hell, there are even decent characters and dialogues! FUCK’S SAKE PEOPLE! Are you all stupid or what?! How can people have no idea about what a fiction should at least be. Like, you can’t even read most of the fictions on this site!
I will end my rant here since else I would certainly start insulting and doubting if those readers were born from unrelated parents. Oh and if some of you dipshits are furious about my review, come at me! I will show you how to fight someone with words you mongrels, you fucking turdnuggets that have no decency. (Oh God I am insulting people, someone step in! AHHHHHH!) Ffs!
RaveAkiharaRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This novel is cool awsome badassery and Harem ^_^ mc is psycho but not to innocent if its his enemy he will kill you and devour yah man and holy shit mc is not some other harem mc his the one who lead the girl in mature and dominate them And he is overprotective too~ so why not try it?Espicialy to those Harem lover may love this~
nexstar74Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
this novel is amazing, continue the great effort.