Primogenitor in Marvel

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2022

Author

Fast_Reader

• Chapter 255
  Jul 6, 2024
• Chapter 254
  Jul 4, 2024
• Chapter 253
  Jul 2, 2024
• Chapter 252
  Jun 29, 2024
• Chapter 251
  Jun 27, 2024
• Chapter 250
  Jun 25, 2024
• Chapter 249
  Jun 22, 2024
• Chapter 248
  Jun 20, 2024
• Chapter 247
  Jun 18, 2024
• Chapter 246
  Jun 13, 2024
• Chapter 245
  Jun 11, 2024
• Chapter 244
  Jun 8, 2024
• Chapter 243
  Jun 6, 2024
• Chapter 242
  Jun 4, 2024
• Chapter 241
  Jun 1, 2024
• Chapter 240
  May 30, 2024
• Chapter 239
  May 28, 2024
• Chapter 238
  May 25, 2024
• Chapter 237
  May 23, 2024
• Chapter 236
  May 21, 2024

Reviews

Community Reviews(4)

• Laughing_DragonRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  This fanfiction is the first of its kind and though a little bit slow in the beginning
  (1-30 chapters) as long as you read this with expectations of an overpowered character, at least on earth, and a tiny bit of rushed romance then you will be satisfied with plenty of entertaining fights/action scenes. Add on top of that good harem relationships where all the characters bring something to the story without just being used by the author for sm*t scenes.
• DaitenguRoyal Road

  ★★ 2.0

  read to chp 29.
  This is one of those wish fulfilment power fantasy fanfics, with a harem. If you're into it, it's a midding story. You could do worse, and you could do better. If you're not into it, it'l be rough to read.
  Style: It's a bit rough cause the POV changes from 1st and 3rd prerson abruptly. And I'm guessing, as usual with secondary language works, some of the flavor is lost in translation.
  Story: Starts in the late 80s and the MC is basically a psychopath with little care to anyone or anything beyond people he cares for. Weird how harem seeking MCs are this way or beta males. Fast_Reader is habitually speed running relationships to an unnatural degree. Also par for the course of harem fantasy in the case of a non beta.
  Grammar: Could be better, but the author is not an english speaker. So I can't hate as Fast_Reader tries and is open to corrections.
  Character: Rather shallow. Also the usual for harem fanfics. The MC doesn't want to do anything but live the baller life, bang his women and play with famly. Also rather inline with most harem fantasies. You do you mate.
  Advise to the author:
  1.Spend more than 4 days courting someone into an eternal marriage situation. The shortness is very... "teen" romance, and no one is a teen in the story.
  2.Vampires weren't pop icons to bang till "Interview with a Vampire" came out in the 94. They were horror monsters. "Lost boys" is more the average view of them in the 87.
  3.Blade will be in the MCU phase 5(anounced back in 2020). So canon wise, Vampires are around. Pretty sure Damian's Madripoor vampire peeps would have encountered some by now(chp 30). They'd be very covetted and hunted by other vampire for their daywalker ability.
• HansworthRoyal Road

  ★★ 2.0

  Sigh, this is the kind of brainrot that makes me read webfictions solely on RR these days. It has all the harem pitfalls like the women becoming lovestruck fools in no time without the writing ability to depict romantic chemistry that would justify it and the pacing of the story is both too slow and fast because of repeating harem SoL slowing it down while conflicts gets solved with no challenge due to OP MCness.
  I will praise the author’s improvement in grammar and prose over the course of the story. It went from borderline incomprehensible to being comparable to the average LitRPG on here. Also ignoring how it got there, the family scenes are pretty heartwarming at times.
  When you post a harem story on RR then you better bring the heat instead of a cookie-cutter fanfic where everything is bent to fit the MC’s will. Look, I like harems and some of my favorite stories on this site are harems but it just means I have a higher standard for these kind of stories. The harem structure doesn’t excuse a poor story as there are still many good 18+ harem stories on this site, the poor ones just gets filtered more harshly. This story will get a warmer reception elsewhere but it just doesn’t cut it here.
• VolcronicRoyal Road

  ★ 1.0

  I read a bit and all I have to say is that there are plenty of better websites for this shameless harem sm*t story... but if you are into this type of explicit story, then read on. Author, please just consider publishing elsewhere… There are kids on this sight that shouldn't read this type of story.