Primal Ascension (Monster Evolution, Progression Fantasy)
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Description
Every planet begins its journey of formation with a cloud of gas and dust, and becomes perfect after awakening its mana.
And following that evolves the creatures dwelling on that planet: Humans, monsters, plants, everything.
Nick is one of these people with an ability that let him see theLevelof others. A pretty useless skill, to be honest.
One day, however, his ability evolves, transforming into something greater. This sudden change would give him an unfair advantage in this dog eat dog world. Nick will not waste this opportunity. He will build his own secret society, gather companions, and battle the invading monsters and otherworldly forces.
Note:This is the first draft, so if you find any inconsistency please let me know.
What to expect:
- Monster Evolution
- Beastmasters
- Action
- Adventure
- Weak to strong
- Animal Companions
- Portal Fantasy
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2024
- Author
- Ring Master
Tags
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.6/ 5.0
- Followers
- 13
- Views
- 3,556
Chapters(8 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- FuriesRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5📝 Overall score
The story is about a protagonist who is an awakening hunter. However, he has been struggling for three years in the bush with no luck and no life. But one day, after enduring hardships, a promising opportunity arises. His skills unlock and he becomes poke-
Sorry, I'm kidding. His skill can see the evolution!!! that will change the game and crave to his revenge!
So grab your popcorn and enjoy! The Mr. Nick from Marasa Town— (Guard dragged me out.) 🦆
🔥 Style score
Your writing is clean and neat, and I was able to read it smoothly. The way you utilized paragraphs and structured your text was done really well. The blocking of the item panel is also good, showing that you have put effort into it.
Furthermore, I really like the one-line lore. Keeping it short like that adds fire to the episode, just like an old wizard speaking up at the beginning of each chapter. It’s really cool.
🌕 Story score
The concept of the story is interesting, and it keeps getting more and more intriguing with each chapter. You manage to add more content and I felt overwhelmed when I read the four episodes. The protagonist’s heartbreak is really well present. His pain in that place is so pain…
And I would love to see more monsters in the story. 🐍🐍
✨Gramma score
I apologize for not being able to comment on the grammar in this part, as I am not a native English speaker. In my country, we only use simple words like “Yes,” “No,” “Okay,” and “Thank you.” However, I will share my emotions while reading this part instead of providing a critique.
The flow of the text is easy to follow, and the vocabulary you have chosen is excellent. I didn’t need to use my dictionary program, which is great for everyone, including non-native English speakers like myself. I am happy and able to enjoy it without any difficulties.
🧝 Character score,
I really like you, Nick, as well as Jack and Kate. The characters are introduced well, and each of them has their own unique style. (Mr.Ali, I feel sorry for yo