Prevented My Empire From Falling

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Description

Reyna died in a major earthquake and she reincarnates into the past-- and becomes Aurelia, the founder of a very powerful Empire who died so suddenly, the Empire broke into pieces which caused nearly millions of deaths. And a 10 year old cycle which brings disasters to the world.

now that Reyna somewhat has memories of her modern life, will she be able to change the fate or, does she have to?

Alternative: must i change the fate

short story

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2021
Author: yolomortals

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Rating: 3.7/ 5.0
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justboredRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
It is interesting but the speed is not really novel like. But the way you describe things are not bad and its quick pace so you dont get bored of itj/. It sort of reminds me of more asian webnovels or were you aiming for that.
also sometimes theres that ********************************************************* part and i just realized the narrator changed. maybe you should do the *********************************** in a different chapter since it CAN get confusing for some readers. but ye its also interesting that some parts there are different narrators although its hard to see if its ht esame person or not. Are we talking about two different narrators or three? or maybe one? so on that part it is quite confusing. so yes, vi suggest you seperate the chaps on that.
i like the fact that u added a tinse of humour though more wouldve been fine. sometimes the story is confusing, because there isnt really a connection with a certain scene. The characters are not bad and you even made a feature that light coloured eyed were rare. also right now it feels somewhat obviuos with what the FL needs to do. you either have a cool plot twist or its just going to be plain and average.
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