Precise

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Description

Liz calmly steadied her breath, only having a single arrow left. A breath escaped her mouth as she took aim. Wind moving heavily around her. The constant nightmare are just a reminder. The silent whispers of the grass echoed in her ears as she finally lets go of the arrow.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2018
Author
VeryIzanagi

Tags

ACTIONFANTASYADVENTUREFEMALE LEAD

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.5/ 5.0
Followers
10
Views
4,641

Chapters(7 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • instadriveRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    Story is good so far.
    But, for the love of higher beings, mind your grammar. Clearly, you do know that have / has both exist, so why not apply them correctly? Same with tense. A sentence begins with past tense and, by some miraculous circumstance, ends with present tense. My soul cringes, dude (or dudette).
    "I am not a native english speaker..bla bla." Yeah. That is no problem, alright, but i very much doubt ANY language ignores temporal logic (i.E. cause and effect), or confuses singular with plural. Such a language would be useless, as it couldn't accurately describe anything.
    That said, i really like the content and i hope you carry on :)