Prayer for The World
Self-Published
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Description
Short story and not related to other chapters
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2022
- Author
- Inugami Sensei
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 2.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 1
- Views
- 219
Chapters(2 total)
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- RznRoyal Road★★ 2.0Both of the short stories are very confusing as to the narrative. The first one makes little sense and seems to be nothing more than a series of non sequiturs that does not explain what happens in a logical way or why Joni has done this. It says images of past and future mixed in - but this becomes a problem with the ending. The bags, his sister Keyla, it makes it sound like Joni sold her out but no? I do not understand. The second bounces back and forth in genders and speaks of being robbed and then chases after some strange children who disappear into the tree and crying over it. It just doesn't make much sense either.