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Jake Ishida expected ordinary days when he moved to a new city. What he did not expect was the mysterious warrior, Pilot, gifting him a strange crystal. The crystal transforms him into the Fire Radiant, a warrior of order. Now, he must learn how to utilize his new powers to fight against the agents of chaos, not only to protect Earth, but also Pilot's world, Galvania.

Inspired by Shounen Battle Manga and the Sentai genre.

Expect a group of teenagers mentored by aliens from another dimension.

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AurathasRoyal Road

★★★★★ 4.5

Story: The story is quite interesting and familiar if you are a fan of shounen manga and anime. While reading through the story, I had quite a few nostalgic flashbacks to some of my favorite old-school battle anime, so bonus points for that alone. The story picks up quite fast and gives you some good action very quickly.
Style: The writing style is punchy and straight to the point, no extraneous information or details provided. You get a very clear idea of what is going on and if anything new shows up, the author is quick to explain it. There is no useless filler, which is something I very much appreciate.
Character: So far, the only character that is really fleshed out at all is Jake Ishida, the MC. However, I don’t expect this to stay that way as enough time was spent introducing a few other characters that I’m sure we will find out more about them. However, Jake is a fun character and I have to say I chuckled at his reaction to getting powers. I mean, who wouldn’t be tempted to do an anime pose after getting fire powers?
Grammar: The grammar in this story is fine, with the only issues that I ran into were with missing words and some missing punctuation. Nothing that will detract from the story. Also, the issues were minor enough that they could be easily resolved.

WeavervaleRoyal Road

★★★★ 4.0

This book has potential but it's going to need a bit of a rewrite before it's ready for the big time.
There's a way that you write when you're doing showing and telling and this is what the author is struggling with right now. So I'm going to say that grammatically this is fine. It's a 5 out of five for grammar but stylistically I'm having. I'm struggling with the reading. It's very on the nose and that's fine for newer author. They need to get their kinks out. Let me check to see if this is their only fiction 659 pages. They should probably know how this is going by the end so I jumped forward to chapter 74 to take a look at it and I'm kind of seeing a lot of the same issues. So basically stylistically a lot of single line things where I want them to have some Beats together. A lot of kind of this reading like a anime which could be fixed.
Story wise it's fine. I just need to style to be fixed before I can fully endorse this. And that is the thing where you have to spend the time getting your chops in going back and editing and learning show. Don't tell.

Adreano CastelanoRoyal Road

★★★★ 3.5

Style: I like your writing. it is fluently and easy to read even if your native language isn't English.
Grammar: My native language isn't English, but I'm really good in understanding the grammar from the language I have to say it is really good. There may be some mistake, but if there are some, I don't find many even if any.
Story: I haven't read very much, but up to now. (chapter 6) there are some wholes. You show to much. We don't need to know everything what mistress M is doing. This story need more which is a mystery and at some times you use to much diffferent povs.
Characters: I think at the moment the style of the chars aren' really good. There are only one at the moment who has a little personality and that is Jake. My biggest problem is, you use to often the hair color or something like this. It is confusing and you often don't get it, who is talking.
Over All: Yes there are at times big mistakes, that I didn't like but over all, this story is good enough to give it more chances to read on. I may change some critics in the future if there are improvements.
Hopefully I'm not to hard for you, but I will read till the End and will upgrade this comments than more.

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