Portgas D Ace and a Boy from Nowhere

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Description

It was a normal day at The Moby Dick when it happened. Ace just finished his 'ritual' in 'trying to take Whitebeard's head' of the day, when The Boy appeared.

"Portgas D Ace?" He asked. At Ace's nods, he continues "You're going to die. But You will be happy, so don't worry about it, yeah!" he smiled innocently.

Ace only can blink in response. "What the hell?" Ace thinks.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2019
Author: 7midnight

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Rating: 3.0/ 5.0
Followers: 4
Views: 360

Chapters(1 total)

Aoi Fern Wallace
Jan 29, 2019

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RznRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
The prose in these piece needs to be copyedited and some of the character dialogue feels very awkward given the setting (particularly the expletive). The characterization of Ace also feels off and then it gets into Ace... Ace... Ace.. with a bunch of summarized internal thoughts in a very repetitive and very distracting number of self-referential thoughts. It sort of degrades to the point that "Ace miss Sabo." is an actual line. So with some clean up and rework it could be more readable.