Pokemon Rejuvenation: A great journey

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Disclaimer:Disclaimer: This is a non profit- fanfic of a fan game. All pokemon thematics pertains to GameFreak, Nintendo and The Company pokemon, as well as the original story pertains to the team devs of Pokemon Rejuvenation, Jan and its team, including the image on the cover. The only thing i bring to the table is the sassiness of the protagonist and some jokes as well as the decisions made. I write it to practice my writing skills and get good time over all (I HOPE!)The journey of Aevium, but through the perspective of a new individual instead of the classic silent meatbag. Play the game. Is dope.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2023
Author
Clyon

Tags

LITRPGFANTASYADVENTUREMAGICDRAMAGAMELITMALE LEADPORTAL FANTASY / ISEKAISOFT SCI-FISTRATEGYURBAN FANTASYPROGRESSION

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Rating
4.3/ 5.0
Followers
7
Views
2,547

Chapters(3 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • vorlefanRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    If you enjoy to play pokemon or in your childhood watched a lot, then you will enjoy that feeling of wishing to have a pokeball, and the dream of being a master pokemon.
    Overall: It has few chapters, so its hard to give a in-depth review about it all, but it shows it has potential!
    Style: The First POV is interesting, but there are some part in which made me confuse about who is who. In this case, try to improve the structure of the paragraphs. I guess that the challenging here is to hit right in the unique voice of the MC, with a good style. One good point is the usage of images, it was amazing!
    Grammar:  there are a few minor grammatical issues and awkward phrasings. I've pointed it out in the prologue.
    Story: I can't dive deep, but it shows a good premise. Some tips: add some smooth transition and try to spacing out details throughout the story to maintain a balanced pace.
    Character: The dialogue flows naturally, and it effectively conveys the emotions and personalities of the characters, but they could be broken down into smaller, more digestible chunks to prevent overwhelming the reader with too much information at once. In general, the character is the highest point here. Ephiron's character development shines in this chapter. His curiosity, excitement, and anxiety are palpable, making him relatable to pokemon fans.