Pokémon: Last Quake (A Pokemon fanfic)

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Description

I appreciate you reading my book "Pokémon: Last Quake". To start, I want to outline a few points and establish some rules that I will adhere to throughout the writing process:

System: The main character (MC) will not be provided with any system, ensuring that all achievements are earned through effort rather than given due to external factors. Additionally, there will be no levels, signifying that growth is achieved through experience, not predetermined by numbers.

Ships: The narrative will not be heavily centered on romance; however, if it does emerge, there will be just one canonical partner for the main character.

Comments: Ideas and critiques are welcome as they help maintain focus. Please feel free to share them, and if they are incorporated, the contributor's name will be acknowledged at the chapter's conclusion.

Lemons: There will be no on-screen lemons, I will be only providing brief descriptions before cutting to the next part of the story.

Embark on a tale of transformation from weakness to strength, centered around a young man's adventure in the Pokémon universe. Thank you for being part of this journey, and I hope you enjoy the experience.

By Mugen Strife

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2024
Author: MugenStrife

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.3/ 5.0
Followers: 369
Views: 104,994

Chapters(34 total)

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Community Reviews(4)

NullVoidDreamerRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I really enjoyed this story. I am a sucker for Larvitar starters. I like the story progression and the characters are relatable. I am looking forward to what other pokemon will join Tyson's team. I like the ground and rock Focus but I am a little sad he might not catch the Feebas from the camping chapter. I was looking forward to the addition of a Milotic.
OddsquadRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
So far so good i love the pacing and how the worlds laid out as of yet (also im totally not biased by his starter being my all time favorite evolution line... shush) but yeah the english is good, the pacings great, (also a very good companion *cough cough*) thank you author <3
RoxaraiRoyal Road
★★ 2.0
How you structure your story and the writing quality itself are subpar and that makes your story difficult to read. Each sentence seems like its own instance and your story in turn lacks a cohesive bond. Fun idea and always write what you enjoy but I cannot in good faith say that your writing, in pure skill alone, is good.
ZeroOne_01Royal Road
★★ 2.0
This Story is a isekai-into-pokemon with an interresting start. While I personally decided to stop reading, I can imagine enjoying it if you can get over my following hangups:
Unfortunately the authors writing, while not grammatically incorrect, reads more like a formal letter - both the characters and narration.
Sentences are often more a statement o ffacts, rather than flowing narration, making them difficult to read.
The narration is in the past tense, and often redundantly repeats the past action (i.e. , mc said/inquired.). Additionally many words, while technically correct, would not find use in normal everyday speech alienating the reader.