Poem Blog - Please Read With Favorite Spice Held in Primary Manipulative Appendage

This is a place for me to post random poems I make on a whim---and school, that too.

Please keep in mind that these poems are either written in 5-10 minutes or at 3am, in 5-10 minutes.

This is my first fiction, I am 16 and any constructive criticism* would be much appreciated.

The Warnings chosen were to give me the space to punch English into submission. Ignore them.

Other than that, If you have suggestion for a subject/line/anything you would like me to make, please put /****/ in it so that I can quickly tell what is and isn't a suggestion.

*meaning, no matter how insulting, it tells me how and/or why I screwed up, and hopefully how to improve.

NOTE: Ignore Genre, it was a required field.

There is nothing down here... yet.